FeralHeart Roleplay => Characters => Topic started by: KarraTheInsane on January 10, 2011, 04:41:20 am
Title: Karra's Bio(s)
Post by: KarraTheInsane on January 10, 2011, 04:41:20 am
Name: Karra Species: A wolf.. A Winged demonic wolf... Gender: Female Age: erm.. Who knows how old she is... Oh.. i do.. no.. No i don't :o Straight. No pups. No mate. Appearance: Jet Black fur and enourmous feathered wings, also black. Her left forepaw is white stained with pink. she has long, sharp black claws. Her Purple eyes sometimes look like they're glowing.. and maybe they are.. Her tail is huge, Long, and bushy. Her base Size is Small.. like a pup.. but ten times as dangerous. History: She was born of an angel wolf mom and a demon wolf dad.. her mom tried to hide her from her dad but when he found karra he tried to kill her... But Karra's demonic blood kicked in and she Killed him as he wanted to do unto her. and when his blood stained her.. She lashed out and killed her mom aswell.. Since then she has been a quiet observer.. and if anyone picked on her she was quick to defend herself.. trying to not spill blood.. but when blood became part of the equasion she went into a fury, trying to kill anyone she could get her paws on. However if you managed to worm your way into her friendship, She'd trust you with her life. and a betrayal.. if she was betrayed.. No one would ever be trusted again.. except maybe a few who have been the most absolute trustyworthy friends ever. She struggles to be normal.. But there is no way for her to be normal with the blood of angels and demons conflicting within her. Personality: Very To herself.. Freindly.. Shy.. when insulted very cruel.. funny. No picture yet ... Surprisingly.
Mwahahaha...
Title: Re: Karra's Bio(s)
Post by: GucchiOxygen on September 08, 2012, 05:32:20 am
I luv your avatar it is sooo pretty and this character bio is sooo great. Very deep character I enjoy that character bio. Feel sad for her mom though :'( I wish you could put a picture she sounds like such a pretty character. I really want to see her now. lol the mwahahaha is so sinister.
Title: Re: Karra's Bio(s)
Post by: Reap on September 14, 2012, 06:19:45 pm
Interesting. I like it =3
Title: Re: Karra's Bio(s)
Post by: Wolfie_Lover on September 14, 2012, 06:29:45 pm
... It's ok. I'm not saying it as the worst or the best bio.
You could've said a demonic wolf, instead of a winged demonic wolf. And instead of saying angel wolf mom, demon wolf dad, you could've said an angel for a mother and a demon for a father. Also, the history is quite long with a short personality. I understand that some of the history has some of her personality, but why such a short personality? Another thing, titles are to be capitalized. Karra is Karra. Not karra. (Sorry, I don't mean to be rude. I guess since I'm sick, I'm teaching others. >.<) *Le sigh*
I saw a couple more mistakes, like more than one period, (unless you were pausing like '...') little spelling, capitalization, wording/grammar, and punctuation. Other than that, it's alright!
Title: Re: Karra's Bio(s)
Post by: WarriorWolves399 on December 02, 2012, 06:57:09 am