Ms. Zalara has had quite a troublesome experience. T'is a shame she ended up badly treated by humans who've turned her personality raw. I wonder what happened to her parents come to think of it. Abandoned, killed, kidnapped perhaps by the same humans she too has come across? I'm rather curious. Plus, the bit about her seekin' out her brother reminds me of my own character so I can relate to her desperation. I also like how ye' added the information about the wildfire and the large amount of smoke renderin' her sense of smell useless. Overall, a well thought out back story.
Not to mention the layout is easy on the eyes and quite pretty in design too. I look forward to knowin' more about yer lassie. Many thanks for takin' the time to share with us.