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RE: A Second Glance...
« on: May 05, 2012, 11:01:38 pm »

Name: Sabel
Age: 2 1/2 years
Bio: Sabel is a lone, free living lion in Flourite. She dislikes violence and cruelty. Her family exiled her due to another lion named Kain framing her for the murder of three of the clan's cubs ((they prefer the term "Clan" over "Pride")) and two of the clan's Elders. Thus, she wanders alone. All of her family are white furred with dark under fur and black socked paws. She has heard stories along the way of other lions- Pridelanders and Outlanders. The story of Simba and his fight against Zira, as well as Kovu's triumph had reached her. She wonders... if either group is still around. Either way, she's determined to find the other pieces that are missing in this story.


Name: Hiro
Gender: Female/ Fae
Age: 2 1/2 years.
Breed of dog: German Shepard/ Wolf Mix
Body modifications: A scar over her left hind leg, and a light scar from a wire that had been around her muzzle. She also has no voice.
History: Hiro has been in the fights for one year. She generally dislikes fighting in the ring. However, understanding it's either a fight to the death or a draw, she's not a timid dog... unless she's back in her cage. She's quiet and doesn't socialize with other animals. She doesn't see the point in making a connection with someone she may end up killing on day. Originally, for her first year of life she had been with a litter of six pups. Her father had been the German Shepard, and her mother had been a wolf that had wandered from the mountains. However, the police officer who owned her father eventually sold all of the puppies. She couldn't remember who bought her from the pet store either.... all she could remember was a white van out the window, hushed voices, squealing, and darkness in what smelled like a flour sack.
How long have you been in the dog fights?: Hiro has been in the fights for one year of her life.


I did the art for Sabel. The photo goes to its photographer XD

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Re: RE: A Second Glance...
« Reply #1 on: May 18, 2012, 03:39:39 am »
Wow. Awesome Bio I love it you should become a writer if your not already and write a book, I'm serious kid. You gots skill :DD
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Re: RE: A Second Glance...
« Reply #2 on: June 27, 2012, 10:26:54 am »
Nice

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Re: RE: A Second Glance...
« Reply #3 on: October 18, 2012, 01:07:54 am »
Thanks! ANd sorry for the late reply. XD Had something in my brain that needed to be checked :D

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Re: RE: A Second Glance...
« Reply #4 on: October 18, 2012, 06:35:22 pm »
^^ Nice characters. I really like the canine in the pictue <3

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Re: RE: A Second Glance...
« Reply #5 on: October 18, 2012, 09:17:16 pm »
Thank you! Anyhow, here's my main character. WARNING: EXTREMELY UNREALISTIC.


-Name: Cloudandis Bloodgear

-Age: 2 1/2 years ((15-17 year old human))

-Height: 32 to 45 inches ((5'1 human))

-Family/Important people in his/her life: She was the only of her litter. Her mother murdered her father, and drowned in Still Silver lake. Now It's called "Still Blood lake".

-Inventory: She generally has sharp healthy canines, large claws, and sometimes a pouch that carries a set of throwing knives. She also has an array of smoke bombs she can use, which can contain tear gas or sleeping gas. Or just normal powder.

-Weakness: Her weakness is her own insanity. She tends to act erratic in tense situations and will murder anyone near her-tending to rip off their limbs. It doesn't matter if they're a friend or foe.
-Personal Bio:
Cloudandis originally lived in the Ohu pack with her mother and father, when she was a pup. But things didn't always go right. The parents were fighting over custody rights for some strange reasons, and life seemed to be turning sour. One minute she could be playing with one, then next minute she could be hiding in the brush to get away from their fighting. She didn't understand why they fought, and just wanted to cuddle up to her mother and father. For a while it calmed down, and everything seemed to be getting a little better. But one night Soloren and Lorek snapped, having enough of each other. After murdering the father, Soloren took her pup and ran like a maniac. She knew the rest of the pack would smell the blood. However, as they passed by Still Silver lake, she tripped on a root sticking out of the ground. Dropping her pup in the mud, she tumbled down into the lake. As she tried to swim up, not noticing the weeds and other plants now tangling themselves in her tail, her sudden push caused a recoil. She was slammed back into the rocks and knocked unconscious, hanging there. Cloudandis could only watch as blood began to fill the lake, turning it int what is now known as "Still Blood Lake". A strange wolf found her out by the lake and took her into Snow Pack, a pack farther out of the woods and into a much colder climate. She moved up the ranks over time, and became the beta of the pack. However, there was anew war she- and the pack- had to fight. Normady, the shade king, had corrupted the land and slaughtered the wolves from neighboring packs. So virtually,they were the only wolf pack within the forest area. Many battles came and went, but eventually Cloudandis broke herself away from her pack. The fact was, during a hunting mission, and upon killing a shade, she'd tripped and slipped into its body, those eyes still glowing. Her pack mates mistook her for an actual shade and left her there. Being caught by a shade scout, she was taken to the campus under the impression of being a grunt; one of the lower soldiers in the shade command. She'd listened to Normady's plan to slaughter her pack with disgust, but as she'd spoken up about other matters, she was caught. Her flew her up to his citedel and they'd talked for a while. many of the things there looked man made, yet.... they weren't. Even the couched and rugs. He'd let her sleep on one of the couches and in the morning flew her back. What surprised her was that she hadn't been killed. Her pack mates were suspicious of her whereabouts. Usually being an emotionless creature, it was unusual to even see a thoughtful look on the Beta's face. She couldn't explain what had happened to them, or they would think she was a traitor. Ever since, she'd left the pack to watch over and protect them no matter what they would think of her. As for Normady, she isn't sure of what she can do. But she will not rest until she is assured of her pack's safety. For now she is trying to gain allies in order to join the fight against the Shade King, take back the land of the frost, and end Normady's rule.
However, she understood just running up and facing the demon wouldn't be enough. She knew she would have to use anything she could to defeat him; and thus along her travels, if she could, she sought out trainers. She learned fighting styles ranging from dance styled combat to the ways of other dogs taught to fight off creatures in their areas.

-The character fighting style(s):
Her main fighting style, is the Capoeira.
Capoeira is a Brazilian martial art that combines elements of dance and music. She trained with a human monk and his students for some time in order to be more than just a half breed, and enjoys the style greatly. ((and although music isn't usually playing in reality, she keeps track of it in her head.)) Along her travels, she also learned a special sheep dog technique from a shelty named Kain. The tactic is to run in circles around your enemy, dive in for a strike, run in circles again in the opposite way, and repeat.

-Anything else that I have missed that seems necessary:
Cloud is a wolf/fox hybrid. The wolf side comes from her mother.... which also explains why it didn't take long for Soloren to kill Shai. Soloren Amouri is cloudandis's mother, and Shai Valanche is her father. Also, she is very weak to the sound of metal. No, not the music, the actual tangible thing. She can't stand the sound and her ears are extremely sensitive. She also isn't very good at ranged combat and prefers to be close to her enemy in order to take them down. However, this is also a fatal flaw. Once locked in close combat with the enemy, she must not give them any chance to attack. If she leaves herself open for even a few slight seconds it can be costly.