nice style with your work. personally i wouldn't commission you since i am a cheapskate and need the money to go into highschool projects, but if i had that money, i would commission you.
i really enjoy the detail you put into the pictures, and the slightly rough/sketchy feel since it isn't completely perfect clean up stuff. you will be an amazing artist some day and the money you'll get from commissions for now will be worth every penny.
that is my personal thoughts, sorry if i sound a bit douche, it's been a long week.