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The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« on: March 14, 2014, 05:08:20 pm »
This is just something I made on my Lunch Hour, Quite short yes but what the heck I wanted to write. Thanks for reading you have my gratitude. -Berrymutt

2 AM:
    I'm Watching Youtube maybe some Minecraft videos when FeralHeart keeps booting up to the mini screen. What? I didn't even open FeralHeart let alone clicking the icon. Maybe it opened using A Hotkey? I hardly doubt it.
2:25 AM:
    FeralHeart will not stop opening up on it's own. I don't know what is wrong with it or why it is doing this. But....something seems different about it....Like....You know the KovuLKD Signature that pops up right? Well now it was replaced by a white Ebon Circle.....The only reason why I even get on FeralHeart anymore. My family...........Did I replace the Signature with A Ebon Circle? I don't Remember doing it so.
2:31 AM:
    Oh What the heck maybe it is time to pop on FeralHeart and derp around. The FeralHeart title screen pops up but I am not greeted with BlackBerry with words written in Teal ''FeralHeart'' On him for my Title Screen. Instead I am greeting with A Ebon Circle with ''THE EBON CIRCLE'' Written above the symbol. Kinda like the TEC Mod That A Older Member Made (Thriller).
2:36 AM:
    I logged in seeing BlackBerry my Fursona and my First Character to see when I log in standing on the pillar like normal. But he looked different for once his eyes were narrowed and his lips were curled up.....When did I change his Emotion to 'Smirk' I always have it on 'Sleepy'. And....Oh god what the heck. Why did BlackBerry have patterns of different colors all over his legs? Is that.....No it's not. It's just A Preset Glitch that is all. Maybe the Inky Moving Texture crapped up and went all over his legs. Hmph Common Glitchy FeralHeart.
2:38 AM:
    I clicked the arrow to check on my other characters. Maybe their presets are glitchy too? Next character: Moie my Black Panther character. And what I see makes my stomach leap into my throat. He looked afraid with A very afraid Emotion on his face. I ALWAYS Give my characters the 'Sleepy' Emotion. What is going on? I clicked the arrow again and I regretted it alot......
2:40 AM:
    Each of my characters Had A scared look on them Their ears pointed down large bulging eyes that looked like they have seen death. Pirius, Captain JC, Marz, Crevan, Just ALL Of my characters! I want to know what is going on BlackBerry is the only character that does not look scared....but crazed. I clicked the 'Start' Button And Logged on............
2:42 AM:
    I entered into the plains....But what A minute...Last time I was online I left BlackBerry in Cape on the rock....How did he? I pushed that out of my mind and moved him around the game. No one was there I normally have arrivals and leaves off so I didn't know this till now. Everything was blank. Even the sky looked darker than normal. Of course I logged on when it was night time in the game...Heh typical.
2:43 AM:
    -Hanzo ETEC is online- Ouka was on! I haven't spoken to my friend in ages! But wait she was logged off on skype...She is normally always on Skype when she is on FeralHeart.
Then it hit me...........
2:44 AM:
    Ouka had Spoke in A Dark grey text not like the dark green text for group chat. And I had no idea what she was saying or what she was even talking about..........
Hanzo ETEC: Well done BlackBerry Our Hunt Was A Success.
She always calls me BB....Or sometimes my real name...Nick.........
I tried to look for what chat she was talking it but all I saw was 'The Ebon Circle' I clicked it looking amazed. It was like TEC got their own FeralHeart server not thinking clearly I typed.
''Ouka what are you talking about what the heck?'' But all that came out in the chat box was:
BlackBerry BTEC: I saw by the colors on my paws that we were Successful sir.
Oh my god what is happening?
2:46 AM:
    This went on for awhile...Me trying to type in the chat box but all that was coming out was bullcrap. I'm done with FeralHeart I'm tired. Wait It wont let me click out or even try to log out is it lagging? Or am I dreaming? I looked down in the chat box to see
Hanzo ETEC: No my dear BlackBerry this is not a dream we now own FeralHeart.
I can't even open Internet Tabs or Skype Tag! What is going on? I even tried turning off my computer but nothing. I saw Rill log on....Soon followed by Iris. And then Baku, Bullet, Skye, And everyone. Everyone in TEC was logged on...What the heck?
2:48 AM:
    I was shocked the sky was still black as ever and when I wasn't noticing BlackBerry was moving I'm not even pressing on the keys to move him! I.......I guess I really do mean HE Was moving towards the Cape Portal. and He entered it.
2:49 AM:
    Everyone was there even bodies of Felines and Canines were there. Cape was flooded with Blackness of TEC Presets and Markings. It was like A Meeting was happening Everyone was sitting in a huge circle and some even turned around to look at me. Once again BlackBerry moved on his own to join them. The chat box was going so fast I couldn't even read it. I was scared...My head hurt I was tired. It was almost three in the morning. I should get some sleep. So why can't I? Baku greeted BlackBerry with his large skull he was smirking and looked almost evil. Then it happened. A voice...A real voice....No audio....I can hear it! Baku is really talking to me! Through my Computer into my Headphones!
Baku ATEC: Krepti! May I have your attention please. It seems tho our quest was A success...We now own FeralHeart!
I was shivering I felt like I had to throw up on my god.
2:55 AM:
    Screams of joy and pleasure filled the air I could hear them My headphones I removed from my head I was just...dead scared. I wanted to lay down and pretend this was a dream...but it wasn't. The FeralHeart screen turned away from BlackBerry and to Hanzo...Kinda like the F3 Button. Hanzo spoke and I felt like I could hear him in my head.
Hanzo ETEC: You may sleep now Nick...We will take good care of BlackBerry.
I fell asleep like I have been laying in bed forever down into darkness.........
3:12 PM:
    I woke up on my own I was sweating. Oh my god only A dream...no A Nightmare. My laptop was shut tucked in the corner where I leave it. Time to get on! But wait Where is FeralHeart? I don't have it downloaded!?
3:20 PM:
    ....Feral-Heart.com....Did they change sites I can't even seem to get the home page to load up. Hmmmm what happened last night? Ah ok let's try this again once more.
3:22 PM:      
    What I see I will never forget. ''Welcome To The Ebon Circle Ruler Of FeralHeart''
Kreptis on top of the dead FeralHeart Staff's Characters.......

I never will ever play or vist FeralHeart again.....
« Last Edit: August 16, 2014, 06:59:57 am by Berrymutt »

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Re: The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2014, 05:12:07 pm »
Let Me Know If Anyone Would Want More. I dunno First Time Writing Creepypastas.
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Re: The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« Reply #2 on: March 14, 2014, 05:14:58 pm »
Oh my god that is a epic story! That really gave me a exciting fright! +Floof
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Re: The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« Reply #3 on: March 14, 2014, 05:22:13 pm »
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you c: .

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Re: The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« Reply #4 on: March 28, 2014, 11:57:39 pm »
Great story.
I loved this.
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Re: The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2014, 06:58:42 am »
I loved it! Mainly the ending! It gave me chills! X3

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Re: The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« Reply #6 on: March 29, 2014, 11:54:04 am »
I love it in a terrifying.. creepy sort of way ;w; I definitely do not recommend reading this at 1am, especially when there's like a giant window next to you. QwQ
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Re: The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« Reply #7 on: March 29, 2014, 04:13:27 pm »
This is amazing! So scary but really interesting, I felt like im in there. Can't wait for the next update :D

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Re: The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« Reply #8 on: May 07, 2014, 08:12:08 pm »
Thank you guys so much for all the positive feedback! I am turning this into A chapter story as the days go by x3. I usually write when I'm at work doing nothing like always heh. I just wanted to say Thank You to you guys <33.

@Kanickie: Thank you for liking my Story and for the Floof :3.

@~Thyme~: Ohhhhh the ending gave me chills to I would flip out if that really happened xD. Thank you for liking my Story.

@~Foalan~: Dem frights be scary. Hopefully I can update my story soon as soon as I translate it from Paper to Computer Document. Thanks for liking my story.

@Sherlockian: I do not recommend creating Creepypastas at 1 AM neither seeing as I find myself doing so ;3;. At first I read just Giant and not Giant Window. It's like the Iron Giant all over again. Thanks for liking.

@Dundee: Oh but Dundee you were in there. Don't you remember the Kreptis attacking you? HarHar Thanks for liking my Story.

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Re: The Ebon Circle (FeralHeart) Creepy Pasta!
« Reply #9 on: June 08, 2014, 10:21:42 pm »
More would be quite appreciated. CPs don't scare me, and this isn't an exception. But this just makes me want to join TEC. Well done, Berry! +Floof~

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