A Shadow Wolf Nightmare... (Creepypasta)

[DangusMangus]

Ugh, Hi there! Thank yah for reading this Creepypasta. Rate from 0->10. So, lets get going on!
 After school, I went back to my home with school bus. I never do that, but I though it will be better than going home in cold and cool winter air. Well, like usual - I told driver where let me go, he did. I was really close to my home, when I started to though what should I do at home. My mother will be sitting next computer, father... Probablly sleeping. I though, I will draw stuff or write stories. I arrived next our flat house, I opened doors, it loudly clinked as camera flashed. I lookedup, frowned. Then, I needed to press right buttons for password!
<me> 3718.
I pressed them, doors slowly moved as they opened right next to my nose. I frowned again. Then, went up stairs to our flat home. I took my keys, un-locked doors. I went inside, then closed doors behind me. Locks doors as rolls another locker.
<me> mom? Dad?
I shouted out loud. No one was there. I went in kitchen, turned on lights as they went through whole corridor of kitchen. I went closer fridge, there was a note. "Hi hunny. We are in city, will be back at home in evening. In fridge I left some yesterday chicken with potatoes. Please eat. In fridge side will be banana juice. Love you. Mom. PS: feed fishes and cat, I had no time." I grined, took cat food and pulled in bowl. Took a step away from bowl, as pitch black walked closer bowl, meowed and started to eat. I smiled, went to large aquarium. I took lots of big leaves and pulled in aquarium. Then, I happily walked in my room. I dropped down my backpack, took off my pelt. Dropped on my bed. Then I sat on chair and rolled next computer. A large screen came out from desk, keyboard lifted up with mouse on it. Computer said hello. I said hello back, then with mouse walked to internet, wrote 'www.feral-heart.com'. It loaded in few seconds. I fast took a look how many playiers are online. All it worte 'Game server is offline'. I was like 'why?'. I went in news, took a look again. Now it wrote 'Game server is online with one user playing'. I grinned, as went chroome down. One time pressed on Fera-heart icon. It loaded up, but everything was wrong... My game background was pitch black, with realistic wolf laying on ground dead, head ripped off. Then, Black Shadow wolf appeard in my computer screen. I fell from my chair. Backed off a little, then, sat back on chair. I wrote my password, but everything went worse... My whole bunch of characters dissapeard, no arrows moving to switch characters, create a new character button was gone. I pressed on arrow, it uploaded a black wolf with glowing red eyes. It name was 'hElLoO'. I waslike 'what the..?' I logged on it, arrived in Fluorite. It wasn`t very strenge, peoples were talking, looking peeps in their roleplay. I was like 'everything is fine with others'. Then, I zoomed to ficho tunnel.I arrived in it... Ficho wasn`t what he used to be! Ceiling was black, walls were like...Pattern. Walls next ceiling were... Strange. There were dripping black thing from up of it. Water was blood water, floor was black wood. I very slowly walked to place, where crystal should be... THERE WERE NO CRYSTAL! In crystal place were dead human, with rope over humans next... I was like 'WHAT THE HELL IN GOING ON?!' I was shocked out. Then, some kind of black wolf appeard next my character. I was about to log off, but Idea came to my head.
<me> Who are you? What`s going on here? What`s happeing?
Questions were usual for me. Who? What?
< > You...Me... Blood... Come... Or... I... You...
<Me> What?! No. no no no. Leave me alone!
I logged off, I shut down conputer, then I went to rest my eyes after accident. I turned my head, becouse I knew someone was behind me... It was... Shadow wolf! Same one! It bit my head!
I woke up.
<me> It was just a dream...
I rubbed my head, then I rolled on my other side. I touched someones nose, scent from mouth was sick... Blood, flesh... I started to scream. Shadow wolf growled, then bared teeth at me. I started to scream loudly, as I felt and saw blood in my hands. I stod up, light up my room, took a look on mirror... My veins were out... A deep and big wound on my neck as from it falls blood down...
Inspired by others, it took few hours =D

Rate guyse!

~Wolfen

[Tenturo]

10 all the way! My heart was pounding as I read this! Nicely done my friend!!!!!

[Chimaera]

Whoa, i'm kinda scared to get on fh now. Please write more!

[DangusMangus]

Oke ^.^

[Kaniki]

To be honest, I rate 8.

There was a lot of mistakes and it was short... 
BUT, I loved it! Please make more.     

[amythealpha]

It wasn't that good. Too cliche and boring, and there were many mistakes. I hope you can do better if you make another one. 4 out if 10.

[BlazingSun]

Nice plot and everything I would rate ten but.. There were quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes so I rate 5

[lindaminda]

This is amazing *-*
Will you upload any more in the future?
I love creepy pasta's

10/10

[lindaminda]

Kind of a common thing with tha shadow wulves, And thar was some spelling and grammer issues like said before me. 3/10

And I dont think its possible to have banana juice xD That'd be weird. Bananas have no juice in them

banana juice XD
I love that, just some milk, bananas and sugar ;.;

[Shenidan]

Guys, The thread is about a year old xD So dont try bumping old threads, and I dont think the author would update since its been long, and Dundee try not to double post, you can try modifying your first post instead Maybe a mod can lock this.