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How It All Began . . . .
« on: February 20, 2016, 08:02:54 pm »
« Last Edit: April 15, 2016, 07:14:27 pm by Hakumi »
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Re: How It All Began . . . .
« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2016, 08:05:21 pm »
Very interesting little story. Keep up the good work, Hakumi! c:
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Re: How It All Began . . . .
« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2016, 09:00:24 pm »
Ah, Thank You Kindly ^^
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Re: How It All Began . . . .
« Reply #3 on: February 20, 2016, 09:43:17 pm »
Hah, I couldn't help but read this is a National Geographic narrator voice.

It's really, really well written. I love the detail you put into it. Pandeer is quite the unique character.
If you add anymore, I'd love to read it. c:
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Re: How It All Began . . . .
« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2016, 10:12:15 pm »
Thank you, Thank you ^-^
And it's okej, I imagined myself putting on a pair of reading glasses while proof reading it a bit and typing it out. Lol.
Can't wait to write more for ya ^^
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Re: How It All Began . . . .
« Reply #5 on: February 20, 2016, 10:14:56 pm »
You seem to know how to grab the reader's attention. The short  story was amazing. Great job! Can't wait to read more.
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Re: How It All Began . . . .
« Reply #6 on: February 20, 2016, 10:30:57 pm »
Why thank you kindly c:
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Re: How It All Began . . . .
« Reply #7 on: February 21, 2016, 07:29:24 pm »
Very nice story! When it comes to errors I think there should be "thought" instead of "thunk" idk...
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Re: How It All Began . . . .
« Reply #8 on: February 21, 2016, 08:00:46 pm »
Ah , Thank You.
I Always Did Have Some Issues Between The Two , I'm Glad I'm Not The Only One Who Probably Thought It.

I'll Be Sure To Edit When I Add More & Thanks You For Your Nice Words ^^
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Re: How It All Began . . . .
« Reply #9 on: February 23, 2016, 07:40:34 am »
Little Update~!
I will be trying to post a new short chapter every week ( Going to be busy a bit ). So for those that are still interested in reading this still , Stay tuned ^^
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