Author Topic: Cat Cry-Chapter 1 & 2-  (Read 2198 times)

Offline DungeonSiegeWolf

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Cat Cry-Chapter 1 & 2-
« on: July 12, 2011, 04:01:16 am »
                                                                      --Chapter 2: Saber & Thorn--
The next day: I, Talon, was walking along the forest with my good friend, Tenzi. We were talking about legends and our dreams. I talked about my momother having her kits to Tenzi. Suddenly we heard a rustle in the bushes. It was a large,fat mouse eating fallen seeds. I knew it was no match for me, but Tenzi wasn't the greastest hunter. So she pased. I dropped into a low crouch. I was ready pounce at the mouse until me and Tenzi heard a yowl from my mom. Me and Tenzi suddenly raced across the forest floor to my den. Was my mother giving birth already? We were almost there when the yowls of my mother had stopped. Did she die? Or was she successful? Finally me and Tenzi reached the den, my mother was laying on her side. Tenzi skidded into a halt but I kept running toward my mother. Luckily, she was breathing and healthy. I saw two bundles of fur close to my mom's stomach. Jema,Kenza,Plasma, and Iwriz were looking at the kits like they'd never seen kits before. My dad and I on the other hand, were staring at the kits like they weren't even there. "Talon" my mother started off "Meet your two new brothers, Saber and Thorn." I flicked my ear, I never really cared about my sibilings. I rolled my eyes Gee, I hope they turn into a great hunter like me I thought to myself. Saber mewed like he was saying something, then Saber and Thorn sqirmed over to me and laid on my paws as if they were trying to comfort me and all my troubles.

                                                                                      --Chapter 3: A Dark Siege--
A few months later: Saber and Thorn were growing to where they could see and hear. Me and my sibilings were almost full-grown cats although I already looked like one due to my enlargement. We all had plenty to eat, we all had comfortable nests, and most importantantly, we had a good life. Well, not we, they had a good life.

It all started when I was at the creek catching fish. I caught three trout, surpised I could carry more than I thought. Suddenly I heard a scream full of terror. This time it was Saber and Thorn. I dropped my kill and ran toawards the den. When I got there my eyes were filled with horror. Jema,Kenza,Plasma, and Iwriz and my mother all were laid in a puddle of their own blood. But wait? Where was and Thorn and Saber? And my father? I went into the den to find Saber and Thorn cowering in the corner of the den. I saw terror in their eyes has I looked into them. I saw my reflection, but what was behind me? Suddenly I felt myslef being pulled out of the den, finding my neck held by a black cat. I struggle to get free but only the grip became stronger. I knew deep down inside me that if I wanted to live, then I needed to fight. I summersaultd, crushing my victim with my own weight (Though I was not that heavy) That didn't seem to kill it. So I quickly scrambled to my paws while the other cat trying to struggle to its. I bit its neck with all my rage. Suddenly I felt my grip instantly lost and went face-foward into the ground. IThen I felt weight on my back, it was another cat excatly the same as the one. I felt even more weight on me. Now I know what was happening, the cats were morphing. Now I felt more weight that I carry. I felt pain,weighed down, and rage. I could probably tell by the weight I was feeling that there was.... about 8 cats on me. I could see Saber and Thorn peeking out from the den looking at me wih terror. All I could think about right now is my poor weak body straining against these heathens. I thougt all was lost when suddenly I felt all weight come off of me. I was finally able to breathe again, but what saved me? I saw a large white tiger-striped tom cat with an amulet glowing and shiny with white. It was my father and his Dark Sealer amulet. It appeared to summon light made all shadows disappear. I was still on the ground,hurting, as I heard my dad strain. Now what is it? I thought to myself. I turned to see my dad with many cats morph and attacking him. "Go, Talon!" my father's voice was weak "Take Saber and Thorn with you! Go far away from here!" I followed his orders, I ran towards the den sweeped up Saber and Thorn in my jaws. I took them far away from the forest. I sat them down and laid down in exhaustion. I looked up saw many acres of land far as the eye could see. I could tell now without my father, mother, and former sibilings. We were heading to huge jorney to find who's responsible for most of my family's death.
To be continued.

Note to Veiwer: I have many texting issues with my keyboard.  That's why alot of things are missing. I will make next chaps after some comments. Have a good day :D

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Re: Cat Cry-Chapter 1 & 2-
« Reply #1 on: July 12, 2011, 01:26:18 pm »
nice story :) i would like to see it again when you change/get a new keyboard :D
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Re: Cat Cry-Chapter 1 & 2-
« Reply #2 on: July 13, 2011, 06:55:10 am »
ty. I have a super old keyboard -_-

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Re: Cat Cry-Chapter 1 & 2-
« Reply #3 on: July 13, 2011, 12:21:00 pm »
thats a neat story

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Re: Cat Cry-Chapter 1 & 2-
« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2011, 05:17:09 pm »
you said it was chapter 1 and two.this is chapter 2 and 3!

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Re: Cat Cry-Chapter 1 & 2-
« Reply #5 on: August 06, 2011, 05:20:31 pm »
Nice story.Read my story outside the pack.All I can say chapter 3 will probably be preety long.