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My Poems.
« on: February 21, 2012, 04:06:10 am »
I have been told that my poems are very nice. All of this belongs to me, If I find out that someone stole it, I will main chu.

Bleeding Rose.
I watch it, the rose,
bleeding black drops,
showing me, I lost it all.

I watched everything die,
only to hit me in the face,
My world is crashing, fate dieing
In those black drops,

Will I survive my fate?


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That glow, What is it?
A animal?, Or a ghost?
I look harder,
and see it, the light.
It shines brightly
showing me my future, present, and past
blinking so fast,
I only catch these words,
"Why me"

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Re: My Poems.
« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2012, 04:06:39 am »
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Re: My Poems.
« Reply #2 on: February 21, 2012, 08:34:18 am »
Beautiful, I would love to proof read yours (maybe add suggestions) and maybe you'd return the favor? :3