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Offline GoodWolf

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Judgement
« on: September 21, 2013, 07:41:18 pm »
You may wander around, trying to catch my eye
But I catch yours before you even know it.
You try to get me to notice you, but I already have.
You try to impress me, but it does not work.
You try your own ways to get a girl, but I'm not the one who likes to get fooled,
And I could tell, which is which in you,
By judgment.
« Last Edit: September 21, 2013, 07:44:57 pm by ~Deeper~ »
I have nothing... so don't bother looking at this xD

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Re: Judgement
« Reply #1 on: November 02, 2013, 11:17:05 pm »
very interesting technique you used there in your poem. I would love to see more though xD
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