Author Topic: ~*{Tranquility}*~  (Read 1829 times)

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~*{Tranquility}*~
« on: October 24, 2013, 11:41:24 pm »
A delightful breeze
Fills you with ease
Your optical lids shut
From smelling a pleasant, naturistic musk
The surrounding foliage is gratifying
None-the-less satisfying
Your frame lays on the dew-dampened atmosphere
This is your zone, free of fear
The forest is lush
You haven't ever relaxed so much
Your audits catch the sound of a waterfall
Which lays as the center of it all
The repetitious sound
Pulls you down
With pure tranquility
And ingenuity
You then fall into a deep sleep
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Re: ~*{Tranquility}*~
« Reply #1 on: October 25, 2013, 12:35:05 am »
Very interesting to read, Neon. You did pretty good on this little poem. Good job! :o

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Re: ~*{Tranquility}*~
« Reply #2 on: October 25, 2013, 11:50:03 pm »
Oh why thank you. X3
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Re: ~*{Tranquility}*~
« Reply #3 on: November 10, 2013, 04:41:46 am »
Awesome Poem Neon! I love your choice of words. :)

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Re: ~*{Tranquility}*~
« Reply #4 on: December 30, 2013, 12:44:40 am »
Thank you. C:
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Re: ~*{Tranquility}*~
« Reply #5 on: December 30, 2013, 01:22:29 am »
I am rather entertained by such a poetic piece of literature sir. Indeed it bestows a sense of tranquil and serenity, much more an ease to imagine. Good job.
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Re: ~*{Tranquility}*~
« Reply #6 on: December 31, 2013, 04:00:45 am »
Thank you. ^^
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