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Road to Amendment (Dedicated to XxspiritmoonXx)
« on: February 11, 2014, 05:41:30 am »
       Me and my wonderfull love are back together.  To commemorate our love I've written yet another poem of how I felt when we got back together.  Feel free to comment or criticize (:   (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tTjWIN5ygx8 .)

    Road to Amendment,
               O' Lookest thou over a land of remnants, of a war, so courageously fought within the heart.  A land of distraught, grief, pain and heartache.  But look what it hath brought.  Instincts cry out "Weep for what has been wrought" But instead I upon my eyesight, in the midst of this heartache, behold a road of Amendment, so beautifully engraved in love and healing..  A heart so torn and hurt,  now feeling amendment.  O' Lord, I thank thee.


(Love you Spiritmoon :D )
(   Love, Jordan              )