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Offline PotatoPotPie

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Feral
« on: June 18, 2014, 04:11:11 am »
Run. Run. Run.

Faster. Faster.

Let the instinct take over.

Become who you were always supposed.

Shred the world with your claws.

Let the blood flow.

Lick it up.

Let the insanity in.

Become feral.
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Re: Feral
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2014, 06:36:53 am »
Ohhhhh I love the freeverse thing you got goin' on ^^
This is a pretty good little poem you have going here! I like it!
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Re: Feral
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2014, 02:17:13 pm »
Quote from: ~Thyme~ on June 18, 2014, 06:36:53 am
Ohhhhh I love the freeverse thing you got goin' on ^^
This is a pretty good little poem you have going here! I like it!

<3 Considering I wrote this late at night, I was surprised how well it came out.
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Re: Feral
« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2014, 02:21:26 pm »
Beautiful, you really have a way with words
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Re: Feral
« Reply #4 on: June 18, 2014, 02:25:33 pm »
Quote from: S-H-A-Y on June 18, 2014, 02:21:26 pm
Beautiful, you really have a way with words

I don't know if you can tell I have a way with words in this particular poem but thanks :3
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Re: Feral
« Reply #5 on: June 18, 2014, 02:28:39 pm »
Love it! :)
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Re: Feral
« Reply #6 on: June 18, 2014, 02:31:26 pm »
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