Author Topic: Eternal Darkness Poem  (Read 1604 times)

Kyaine

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Eternal Darkness Poem
« on: July 17, 2012, 03:14:31 am »
I'm having troubles with my mind,
Self confidence is no where to be found,
 My depression getting worse along with my age and my fucked up head,
 Is too scared to find a cure,
 Is too nervous to do anything,
Doesn't have the motivation to do what needs to be done,
 Life problems and doubt of friendships making the pain stronger,
 Bleeding heart, Split into two, Unrepairable.. Eternal darkness..

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Re: Eternal Darkness Poem
« Reply #1 on: January 24, 2013, 03:42:21 pm »
Very meaningful. I believe you have the ability to make something great! Your poem keeps us hooked, suspense wondering what the next line would bring..... Keep striving for better pieces. :)

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