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The Butterfly
« on: August 20, 2012, 03:02:22 am »
The others have given up hope.
They say that all is lost,
That the world has betrayed them,
And God ignores their prayers.
Nothing is left to call their own
But dust and death and gall.
I say differently.
I say that light still lives,
Even if it doesn't shine for us.
If there is still some light,
Then perhaps we still have something to live for.
Why do I think this way?
I saw a butterfly this morning,
Fluttering daintily on my side of the barbed wire fence.
I saw a butterfly this morning,
And that gives me hope

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Re: The Butterfly
« Reply #1 on: August 20, 2012, 03:13:36 am »
that was so beautiful *claps* <33 I love this so much i just c': no words other then exeptional


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Re: The Butterfly
« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2012, 08:31:06 pm »
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I only discovered the Poetry Section yesterday...

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Re: The Butterfly
« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2012, 08:32:48 pm »
Awesome! *Turbo-clap*

I suck at poetry. xD

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Re: The Butterfly
« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2012, 11:53:35 pm »
Thank you for the turbo-clap lol! :D

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Re: The Butterfly
« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2012, 08:15:43 pm »
NICe peom... but i read that last school year for a project over the nazi's... a young child was captured and he wrote the poem... (Sry but great poem i give you credit for enthusiasm!) :3
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Re: The Butterfly
« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2012, 10:05:21 pm »
NICe peom... but i read that last school year for a project over the nazi's... a young child was captured and he wrote the poem... (Sry but great poem i give you credit for enthusiasm!) :3

...wait, are you saying that I stole this poem from an actual child victim of the Holocaust and claimed it as my own?!

First of all, I would never steal someone else's work, and secondly, I would NEVER steal from a child-victim of something as traumatic and horrific as the Holocaust. I congratulate you for spotting the Holocaust-inspiration (I wrote this poem after reading The Sunflower by Simon Wiesenthal), but I do not appreciate being accused of something that I did not do.

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Re: The Butterfly
« Reply #7 on: September 04, 2012, 02:05:53 am »
No im not saying you stole it. I was just saying i read it last year in my holocaust projecy. My teacher made us read it. But im glad you gave knowledge to the world over this poem o3o
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Re: The Butterfly
« Reply #8 on: September 04, 2012, 02:07:03 am »
Im sorry if i got mixed up. it might have been it it might have not Just seemed like ti sorry for confuzzlement
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