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[[Upon The Bloodred Sky He Howled Contest Entry]]
« on: January 22, 2013, 11:34:02 pm »
This entry will be involving three of the only characters I actually have created but rarely used (or interacted with) throughout the TAP/TBC series: Uli, Juniper, and Perseus. The poem will have sections per character which will be woven to create their own separate monologues which alludes to some events in the main storyline or their past!~



Surely, has the world not seen past the eyes
of those fallen with their crooked lies, for they
surely have seen into the sky and take notice
the gods are killing them with their surprises?

Slowly the wind blows and there the stars
that show that the end is nigh for those
in the war between black and white!

The hushed calls of the spirits slowly reach down past the soul,
nevermore will they never stop to gloat of the four who
they deemed to save us all. Life or death, you may ask,
only the wind blows and it only knows.

A plague of bloodshed is dawning with war,
but gray is suited for me since apparently,
seeing as how the youth is corrupted for you see,
several of the four are infatuated for those black!

They say the wind sometimes lies but only
those with familiar with demise can note
all the misery placed down for the amusement of those dying!

The eyes of innocence, like mine, will never want to see this day come,
as the the once-tainted guardian shields my eyes in regards
of what little innocence still lies within the soul of someone,
that has nothing left to hold.

All of what I am is invisible to the battle approaching,
as there is greater threat subduing the family which I love dearly,
but the regrets of a cry has left me standing on a splitting road:
which way must I go?

The agony of leaving makes me just a puppet in this game,
never have I felt no greater shame than being painted black
when I'm merely a marionette on strings that aren't controlled by I!

The morning will still rise after the war is through with rain, washing away,
the facade each of us hold but only the chosen ones can show who's
death bells toll for I am a subservient guardian left in the shadows,
with eyes averted upward to the heavens.







=====Summary of characters===

Juniper: A female African wolf dog that is a nomad that is traveling the land with her student, a ocelot cub named Perseus. She was an ex-god whisperer for a pack where she was raised but was excommunicated for trying to alter several prophecies largely invoking the death of her parents (and thus, she was made the one to do it.) Mere allies with "TAP" and will later become the future god speaker after the time skip.  (Paragraph 1-3)

Perseus: The student to the witch doctor known as Juniper. He is a ocelot cub that was orphaned at a young age due to unknown reasons but it seems that his teacher knows much more than she should! After the timeskip, he might part ways with his aging teacher or stay. ( Paragraph 4-6)

Uli: The eldest female pup to both Kevin and Auri. She is not the chosen one unlike her brother Orion but will take as much responsibility for her own family's welfare but regret hangs heavily on this one. She soon joins the TBC in debt towards showing the harsh reality to Lilith, leader of TBC, that her children left her for TAP. She is now a residing servant after the timeskip. ( 7-9)

[[The credit of the "prophecy" goes to Caylis but the characters and poem are strictly my property. Please do not steal~. ]]
« Last Edit: January 23, 2013, 12:49:39 am by SoaringAway »

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Re: [[Upon The Bloodred Sky He Howled Contest Entry]]
« Reply #1 on: January 22, 2013, 11:38:12 pm »
Very nice. I really liked it :3 +Nuzzle.

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Re: [[Upon The Bloodred Sky He Howled Contest Entry]]
« Reply #2 on: January 22, 2013, 11:45:13 pm »
owo ~! Aye, gracias Thrillex! However, I am not done with the poem (dear god, I am procrastinating too much.)

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Re: [[Upon The Bloodred Sky He Howled Contest Entry]]
« Reply #3 on: January 22, 2013, 11:47:42 pm »
Sorry 3: The excitement got into my system somI had to post^^; and I'm truely love it.

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Re: [[Upon The Bloodred Sky He Howled Contest Entry]]
« Reply #4 on: January 23, 2013, 01:07:12 am »
Aye, thank you yet again ;w; ~. I just hope it make senses. xD

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« Reply #5 on: January 23, 2013, 01:10:44 am »
Ya it does :A:

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Re: [[Upon The Bloodred Sky He Howled Contest Entry]]
« Reply #6 on: January 27, 2013, 07:41:16 pm »
Thanks, Soaring! :D Sorry fpr the long wait! DX I had a stupid bill -.-