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"Poem"
« on: March 24, 2013, 03:44:22 am »
Been going through a lot of hardships from loosing my other half to loosing the people I was close to. I vent using poetry.

These are (c) to me you may not use them with ought my permission.


Dried

My heart is that of a empty shell twas full of love.
but now nothing more than a dried up ol well.


One Sided Symmetry

Two sides to equal one
Complimenting each other equivalent to one
One gives and Takes
The other side never gives but always takes

While the hearts should beat in everlasting rhythm
The once tightly held hand, loses its rhythm

As time goes on heart sinking sets
Questions questions..why don't you just confess

Ones eyes glow the others fade
Two hearts that beat as one
Are now too faint

Battle Under the Seas

Of I must strive with waves of pain
I battle with myself in a deep dark sea
My sight begins to fade
As the last glimmer of light strays
My howls begin to disappear and fade
The pillars of my heart have gave

Reaching out for one last time
Only to feel the thick darkness that has drowned me
I give in, sinking, fading into the black

The pillars of fate began to cave me in
as the result of my chase
had done me in

« Last Edit: March 24, 2013, 03:46:29 am by SCP-173 »

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Re: "Poem"
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2013, 07:01:00 pm »
Very good, Nowe!

Very sorry for your loses...

Like you, I vent using poetry too.
stinky dog coming through, don't mind me!

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Re: "Poem"
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2013, 07:19:11 pm »
Really sorrowful and beautiful poems...
The feeling of losing people is so terrible, but it's good to vent through something, like art or in your case poetry.


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Re: "Poem"
« Reply #3 on: March 31, 2013, 01:07:27 am »
Thanks guys btw Bouncy the person who drew your wolfie in your sig would they by chance be open for DA point commissions?

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Re: "Poem"
« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2013, 05:39:26 am »
Thanks guys btw Bouncy the person who drew your wolfie in your sig would they by chance be open for DA point commissions?
Not sure..but Ravenwing is doing free requests, but right now the requests are closed because I think Ravenwing is a busy irl. But here's the link to the requests page and you can request once it's opened up. :3
http://www.feral-heart.com/index.php?option=com_jfusion&Itemid=2&jfile=index.php&topic=32484.0

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Re: "Poem"
« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2013, 05:41:39 am »
Thanks guys btw Bouncy the person who drew your wolfie in your sig would they by chance be open for DA point commissions?
Not sure..but Ravenwing is doing free requests, but right now the requests are closed because I think Ravenwing is a busy irl. But here's the link to the requests page and you can request once it's opened up. :3
http://www.feral-heart.com/index.php?option=com_jfusion&Itemid=2&jfile=index.php&topic=32484.0

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