a poem...?

[Chunky_Squirrel]

Okay so i thought of a poem....

Not to soon,
Not to far,
Never too late for the fall.
One shall,
Rise,
One shall,
Fall.
Not today, not for all.
Never there,
Never here,
Forever shall he live in your fear.

So, what do you think?

[Chunky_Squirrel]

bump?

[Chunky_Squirrel]

Another poem, it kida is from the Green Lantern movie/carton.

In brightest day,
In blackest night,
No evil shall escape my sight.
Thoes who bare ship shaft the sight,
Shall not escape the fight.

[WhiskerWatcher]

Oo, very nice poems! You definitely have skills. Good job Hackers!<3 +Floof.

[Chunky_Squirrel]

Thanks, the first poem came to find yesterday.
And the second just today.
Thanks for the floof.

[Chunky_Squirrel]

Okay... another poem.... a small one....

He had fell,
You have raised,
Just because your right.
Not for theme,
Not for us.

[crosscreature]

Amazing poems Hackers! I like the choice of wording, you definitely have some skill!

[Chunky_Squirrel]

Lol, thanks. ^.^

[Chunky_Squirrel]

Hmmm, how about this?

In the midnights call,
At the sunrise fall,
The moonrise will fell.

(It takes me about 2-5-10 minutes to creat a poem.)

(-)(+)Please tell me what you think. ^.^ (+)(-)

[OreoHeroz]

These are lovely poems Hackers!<333 amg I can't make a poem for my life ;v; i'm so jealous

Hmm... For the last one, do you mean fell or fall? (The moonrise will fall) or (The moonrise will fell)? Sorry I'm just confused.

Otherwise, the poem is amazing<3 C: