A Random Poem~ ElDorko

[ElDorko]

Random Poem!

The street lights flicker out,
causing my heart to give out.

For what am I without you?
A restless autumn leaf scraping across the asphalt on a darkened street?

I guess we'll never know now,
because you had to go now.

The pain and suffering's gone now,
however I can still feel the heartache now.

An aftermath of some sorts,
haunting my frame of mind.

The pain chilling my core,
forming a behemoth sore.

The suffering is like the beating of an eagle's wings.
Constant, and continuous.. A loop of this everlasting anguish.

Like it must flap its wings, its anguish, to continue flying.
To somehow make me feel alive, for without it i'd fall from the dark night sky, into the oblivion below.

(Believe it or not, I just came up with this on the spot.~
Hope I haven't copied or rephrased any single lines, but it's quite late, and I'm not sure!
Just know that I haven't made this under the influence of anyone else's work, this is completely mine! )

~ElDorko

[Vespian]

An amusing poem. I've always been a fan of literature tainted in melancholy and martyrdom. Thus, I must admit a job well done. More so since you've thought/typed up such a poem in little timing. I'm impressed.

[ElDorko]

Ah, thank you Vespian. I appreciate your feedback.
And yes, I've always had quite a way with poetry and literature.

[~Stargazer~]

Neat little poem you have here c:

[meeeea]

Purdy poem - I can barely come up with one line. :3 Great job!

[ElDorko]

Thank you Rii and Stargazer! c:

[Trixxy]

You are a great poem writer! -Can't write a poem at all- I hope to see more of your work in the future~

[ElDorko]

Thank you!