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Offline Spottedbears

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a few poems i wrote for school
« on: May 07, 2014, 04:15:36 am »
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Re: a few poems i wrote for school
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2014, 04:45:49 am »
I have to admit that all the poems ye've provided are really good, Ms. Spots. I really liked Whiskers. and the student i could've been. While they may have been lengthy, the layout and general word by word usage was worth the read. Truly. The compare and contrast in the student i could've been really reflects the perspective of one who isn't as accepted into society as someone else may be. The same goes for Mirrors.. Then Whiskers.. I am simply amazed by this piece of literature. Especially the endin'.
Great work, madam and I look forward to seein' additional poetry written from ye'. While I may not read many poems, I know a good one when I see it. I hope ye' get a good grade for these such as an A+!
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Re: a few poems i wrote for school
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2014, 05:03:36 am »
aa, thank you vespian c:: whenever i read nice comments i can't help but smile and blush, sometimes without realizing it!

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