Author Topic: "This Year" An 8th grade poem  (Read 1730 times)

Offline Kastilla

  • my mind is a sieve for inspiration.
  • Community Champion
  • ****
  • Posts: 2,382
  • Country: 00
  • Floof-O-Meter: 71
  • [ ] make time go faster
    • View Profile
"This Year" An 8th grade poem
« on: December 28, 2014, 01:35:04 am »
Will this year be different, or the same?
Will I see you at all?
Could you be in a class of mine?
Maybe at the end of the day so I could be a little happier?
Will I be able to tell you how I feel?
Or, will you stomp me in the dirt like everyone else?
Will you see the real me?
Or will you see the dark side of me?
Are you like me?
Or, are you like all other rotten adolesents?
Do you like me? Friend? Companion?
Not asking for anything more.
Can you calm me down?
Or will you just make it worse?
My mixed feelings hurt me.
Will they hurt you?
Can I tell you my sorrows?
Will you be there to hug me when Kat isn't there?
Will we sit next to each other?
Or, accidently bump into each other?
It will be my fault if your books fall.
I'm too clumsy.
If you wave at me...
I will just nod, and probably trip over my own foot.
Catch me?
Nah, I can save myself, it happena a lot... I know what to do.
Will you shut the bullies up?
Or just laugh with them?
stinky dog coming through, don't mind me!

Offline Kastilla

  • my mind is a sieve for inspiration.
  • Community Champion
  • ****
  • Posts: 2,382
  • Country: 00
  • Floof-O-Meter: 71
  • [ ] make time go faster
    • View Profile
Re: "This Year" An 8th grade poem
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2014, 01:36:22 am »
I had to cut some of this out, so ... Space limits, y'know?
Also, this was written the summer before I went to 8th grade - I have since written a lot more pertaining to this subject... a lot more, deeper, stuff.
« Last Edit: December 28, 2014, 01:39:08 am by Wolfie_Okami »
stinky dog coming through, don't mind me!

Offline Kastilla

  • my mind is a sieve for inspiration.
  • Community Champion
  • ****
  • Posts: 2,382
  • Country: 00
  • Floof-O-Meter: 71
  • [ ] make time go faster
    • View Profile
Re: "This Year" An 8th grade poem
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2015, 09:43:04 pm »
Anyone care to read?
stinky dog coming through, don't mind me!

Offline Vask

  • #2FAB4U
  • Pack & Pride Representative
  • ****
  • Posts: 1,366
  • Country: us
  • Floof-O-Meter: 80
  • Chaotic Neutral
    • View Profile
Re: "This Year" An 8th grade poem
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2015, 01:24:06 am »
This is an absolutely beautiful poem, Wolfie!
It really portrays the emotions well.
The feeling in this poem is really great, and it flows together nicely too :3
I'd love to see more poems from you <3

Offline Kastilla

  • my mind is a sieve for inspiration.
  • Community Champion
  • ****
  • Posts: 2,382
  • Country: 00
  • Floof-O-Meter: 71
  • [ ] make time go faster
    • View Profile
Re: "This Year" An 8th grade poem
« Reply #4 on: January 10, 2015, 06:39:19 pm »
Thank you, lassie.
I appreciate your comment.
stinky dog coming through, don't mind me!