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Poems / Darkened Night ~}Song Lyrics{~
« on: January 22, 2013, 12:45:07 am »
I hope song lyrics count as a poem of some sort... :/ If not, you can proudly move it. I don't mind at all.

I came up with these lyrics a while back... after I found some inspiration from a harsh life. It represents my life in an unimaginable way... and you may guess it. C: Held wthin these lyrics is a true message bound to my soul. I hope you guys enjoy.
If you would like to know the song that goes along with the lyrics, I'll be happy to tell you the name of the song.

Celtic Mystique - Buachaill on eirne

I do not own this song, therefore no credit from the song goes to me. The lyrics, however, do. Enjoy!~

Darkened Night

Struck alongside, the path goes...
Within this dark night.
And as the wind blows,
the lands far beyond shine from the light...

With a strong heart it strides...
and a soul made of silver.
The wolf from far off, his wisdomful mind knows all..
from ground to the sky.

The stars twinkle high up above..
Lighting all to its way.
Only then does it come alongside the lone path..
darkened night...

Ashen wolf, does it show...
how life lingers onward?
Farewell to all it seems as it's time...
the darkened night's love...

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Struck alongside, the path goes...
Within this dark night.
And as the wind blows,
the lands far beyond shine from the light...

When the sun appears low...
And the moon dims away..
The wolf... the dark wolf takes away the night...
and up comes the day...

The wolf takes away the dark night...
and up comes the day...

It is somewhat weird to have created lyrics like this to go with a song like.. that.  I'm too old for stuff like this.. but I felt a bit bored.. and this sort of helped me escape a state of depression.. :/

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In-Game Roleplay & Group Advertisement / VïÇE ||ÜðH|| ÂÇEÐïð
« on: January 18, 2013, 02:14:31 am »
VïÇE ||ÜðH|| ÂÇEÐïð


Welcome lovelies, to the pack of depression.

In the lands far beyond, away from any inhabitants such as humans that may cause us harm... lies a sacred pack. Together, it has lived within depression and yet still grows to this very day... A crisis has broken out beyond the lands, affecting the pack greatly with such disrespect... The Marktführer, also known as the Former Hessian, grows weary... but searches desperately for a miracle to shine its birghtness upon his beloved pack.

VïÇE ||ÜðH|| ÂÇEÐïð, translated to "Eternal Depression", is a unique pack with a German touch to it. We are long-term, semi-realistic, extremely literate*, sited, and soon to be mapped. I am in search of new blood to join this band of brave wolves, fighting for an important cause that may deal with the lives of wolves from far beyond the great lands.

Are you willing to join us? I, the Marktführer, strongly advise you to... for you can be looked up to as a great hero.
Fill out your application from down below, and then visit the website:

http://fhviceacedia.forumotion.com/

You can only sign up for the site after I approve of your application... and if you don't feel like applying here, find me in-game by whispering .:Talon:.


**Your Feralheart Username:
*Name of Character:
Nickname(s):
Age of Character:
*Gender of Character:
**Species (Type of wolf):
*Pelt Colour:
*Marking Colour:
*Eye Colour:
*Overall Reference (Screenshot of your character):
*Personality:
Unique Traits:
Likes / Dislikes:
*Character Theme Song:
Brief History / Past:
Other:
**RP Sample:


KEY:
* - Strongly advise that you include these.
** - Key to being approved into the pack.


Once you are finished, please log-in onto your character and whisper me. Recap -> .:Talon:. is my in-game username. Do not send a friend request, for I strongly dislike too many people in my Friends Box.

We are expecting you, lovely. You will bring us to better places... and without your help, we may crumble and fall apart. I, the Marktführer, will forever appreciate your applications... for I have faith in all of you, to join us.. and fight for us.




VïÇE ||ÜðH|| ÂÇEÐïð

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Stories / Black Feather -=- Chapter I
« on: January 10, 2013, 03:51:53 am »
'Twas the midst of winter, a day so calm, so peaceful. The only Winter's day where the snowflakes and flurries fell at unbelievably beautiful ways. The sun shone brighter than at midst Summer's Eve, the light reflecting ever so elegantly off the pearly white snow. There was but a hint if greenery, except for the evergreens that were frosted with snow crystals. O' how beautiful the winter is most beautiful... Though that is just an opinion.

The distant calls of a lone Black Raven were heard by many from faraway places... and the calls were absolutely wonderful, though they sounded unemotional.. lonely, sad... hollow, empty.
That was how Raktoz described them. He sat amongst a boulder which perched gently near the mouth if his den, his tawny auditives flickering every which way to analyze the calls in-depth. It has been decided, as the great wolf lowered his head and slowly waded back into his fairly large den.
"Daetir, the Raven calls," said Raktoz. He laid by a beautiful fae, whose fur was as silky as warm milk and as soft as a wool blanket. The name she wields is Daetir, a name that rightfully fits her personality at best.
Hearing her brother speak, she opened her eyes revealing golden optics.
"May I speak the poem?" Raktoz asked, his voice wading swiftfully into the chilled air. His sky blue eyes showed his thoughts clearly, as he recited the Raven's poem of Midst Winter's Eve in his wise mind. Daetir peered out of sockets from an old skill she wears proudly upon her head as she spoke through he heavy British accent, "Of course, brother. Let the poem die and live 'til the next." Her words were true, and rang out with burning passion.
A faint smile appeared on Raktoz's toffee-hued face, as he opened his mouth to form the peaceful poem... which was thought as an old legend of the Black Ravens from the ancient but forgotten civilization.
"'Twas midst Winter's Eve.
The Black Ravens call to
Other animals receive..
The land known of covered by rich winter dew.
And to later, of which life starts anew...

The dim moonlight shines.
The diamond stars gleam bright,
As of the wolves whose head reclines..
A great howl touched by light,
A voice of integrity from wrong or from right.

The Ravens travel to and fro.
Their worshipped Black Feathers
Drifting elegantly below..
O' how peaceful of the weather,
To touch the Black Feathers with strong flakes as leather.

To whom we acknowledge?
The Ravens of course.
They possess great knowledge...
Unlike other birds, their calls not as hoarse,
Though calls hold of unbearable news to which some react with great remorse..."
Raktoz finished, his accent fading slowly. Daetir unleashed a heart-warming smile as his words were pure and thick with meaning. The Black Raven calls...
Where shall things lead...?

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Hope you guys liked it so far. Comment for more chapters.~ :3

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Stories / -=- A FeralHeart CreepyPasta -=-
« on: January 08, 2013, 12:38:58 am »
I'm Not Here....

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It was of a rainy night, not too serious. The sky was just dark and dim, the rain pouring at an average pace with the constant rumbling of lightning and thunder. I absolutely enjoyed weathers like these... but my Siberian Husky, Makara, disliked them very much. She would try desperately to squeeze underneath my bed (which, by the way, had only about half a foot space to get underneath... My Husky was well over that size.. :I), and after she had gotten barely half of her body underneath, she would give me that look as if saying 'I'm not here.'. I would laugh at her, and stroke her gently to calm her down.

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One day... it was the same. Same ol' rainy weather, but it was far worse than before. Much more lightning... lightning that almost reached down to touch my street... or my house.

I was on my laptop in my comfortable room, though sorrowness filled me deep within. Makara had died from shock... oh how much she hated the lightning, and the rain... and now she's dead because of her frighteness... She was my best friend, forever loyal to me. Tears streamed down my face as I tried to pull myself together.

I had just gotten FeralHeart, and was trying it out for the first time. I logged into my account and created a random character for the time. As I was waiting for the server to load to Lonely Cave (so loneleh...), I logged into the forums, viewing all the boards and topics. I found this game to be quite interesting... but then I found 'Presets'. A thought rushed into my mind... Makara..

After endless hours of working on my very first preset, I have done it... I made an exact, perfect replica of the Siberian Husky that Makara was. I put it up for download for all to see, and in my Bio I have typed out who the lovely Makara was and how she died... and how she was so important to me. I logged in as her, and looked for a good portal to go through to start my adventure.~

Though, when I entered in a place known as "Ficho Tunnel", no one was there. I found it not as weird... for I was new to this game and thought that probably no one liked to be in this map... No matter... I found another portal leading to an area known as "Bonfire Island". No one was here, either. I found it somewhat weird... for after hearing upon my friends that about 118 players would be found here, I was sure there would at least a few...

I scouted the entire island, no one to be found... Though I did... find something unusual. It was a mesh of a dead canine, blood covering the portion of its chest where its heart should be... I learned how to use 'F3', using it to get a better view... There was a hole... leading to inside of the animal mesh... its veins were hanging out, dripping with fresh blood, and there were arteries torn apart... hanging from an empty space to which I found the heart missing.

I was somewhat spooked... knowing this was a kid-friendly game, meaning no blood or gore... I got suspicious. I turned Makara around back to the portal to "Ficho Tunnel"... but when I stepped inside, a menu popped up on my screen saying "Map File Not Found"... and the lettering was in red. After I clicked "Ok", I found the partal gone with a scratch marks on the side of the hill where the portal should be... The marks were placed as an 'X', and blood streamed down...

I was thinking 'Okay... So maybe there's another way out of here..'. I remembered the "Home" button, so I clciked on the little feather and then "Go Home"... but the same menu popped up.. "Map File Not Found".. though it was a darker red... and the letters looked much more bloodier... And this time.. there was no "Ok" button to click.

The weather got worse, terrible winds almost taking down my fir tree I grew for a few years now. The thunder and lightning grew louder and stronger... and it reminded me of Makara. I got up from the laptop for one minute to close the blinds on my window, but when I got back, I saw my character laying on its side... looking exactly like the dead canine mesh I saw earlier. I started to freak out a while... until in the chatbox... someone spoke. There was no username... only three, red question marks..


<? ? ?> Is anyone here?

I could tell by the colour of the chat the it was in Whisper but why were the marks.. red?... I clicked on the chatbox to type myself... but no caret was appearing. Again, the unknown player spoke.

<? ? ?> ...I see you...
<? ? ?> In your room... your room... there's a leak in your roof... above your head... look up...


My heart pounded... I was trying to understand how this unknown player knew where I was... why it was talking to me... how it got its username to be that colour... But the thoughts were wiped away as blood dripped from above onto my keyboard... then a few more drops..

I froze with fear.. as my head slowly lifted up to see a large, beating heart hanging with veins taped to the ceiling of my room. My eyes started watering with fear as I turned back to the screen of my computer, seeing there was another post the unknown, creepy player has typed.


<? ? ?> I found your heart...

I spam-clicked my mouse on the chatbox, wanting so much as to type and yell out what exactly is happening. I was relieved to find that the caret has appeared. I typed quickly... pressing 'Enter' afterwards, awaiting a response... I was wondering why my character's name appeared other than my username for Whisper... but no matter... This was our lit'le chat..:

<Makara> Who are you? How do you know this... WHO ARE YOU?!
<? ? ?> Lightning... lightning everywhere... take the pain away...
<Makara> Wha? What are you talking about?! Are you going to answer my question?!
<? ? ?> It striked my heart... an unbearable attack...
<Makara> ANSWER ME PLEASE! I'M FREAKING OUT! I JUST WANT AN ANSWER!!!


To this I was getting frustrated.... Tears streamed down my face as my body shook with fear... I could hear the beating of the taped heart on my ceiling getting louder each minute... I even screamed aloud... as lightning struck my house...
I crackle and a pop.... a fire has started inside and outside my house... I started freaking out even more... until the unknown player revealed itself... and said something simply familiar...


<? ? ?> I'm not here.

That very saying reminded me of how I interpretted the look on Makara's face... as I told you before... and in this post.. the entire chat colour was dark red...

Looking at the player's character... it looked exactly like Makara... realistic fur textures... as if a real dog were trapped inside the game itself... I could see the same hole in the chest.... And once more... it posted..


<? ? ?> Look behind you... Good night...

It disappeared just before my laptop shut down automatically... The heart fell to my keyboard... and I let out a scream of bloody-murder... I turned around to see my Husky.. Makara... growling.. with the same hole.. in her chest.. as she lunged at me, biting at my chest...

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I typed this from a different laptop... I lay here in the hospital... after getting surgery on my chest... The surgeons came up to me with a tray... and in it, there was a heart-shaped keychain covered with blood, with engravings that said "I'm not here" marked on it...

"We found this lodged into your chest..." one of the surgeons said...

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So how do you guys like it? This was my very first "Creepypasta" and I hope you all enjoyed. Rate from 0-10 on how much you think it was good.
If I get many 7's or higher, I'll do more Creepypastas for you! Well... hopefully... xD I'm kind of braindead now after writing this.. I may need a bit more inspiration... Lol.. :P
So anyways... comment, rate... I do not care.. xD

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Art Gallery / Talon,.,'s Entry
« on: January 07, 2013, 12:31:18 am »
Here is my entry for the drawing contest.~
It shows two wolves from Feralheart, (obviously :P). The one on the left is Talon, my character, who is holding a rose given by Teranova [(c) Logical], the fae on the right. It took a long while to get the anatomy of the two right, and I'm happy with the way it came out.~


It is also up on my deviantArt. --> http://sinister-beast.deviantart.com/




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