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Vee's Revisions
« on: January 07, 2011, 08:28:56 pm »
I'm far from a good artist; spend most my time working with cervids. But rejoining this community may allow me some inspiration to widen the range of species I draw.

So I'll start by introducing my lion demonic: Huile.


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Re: Vee's Revisions
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2011, 08:30:05 pm »
Oh nice i like your drawing :)

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Re: Vee's Revisions
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2011, 08:49:03 pm »
Neat. The angle of the nose suggests we should be able to see part of the other eye, but that's just me. I love the legs though, they're awesome. Interesting character!

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Re: Vee's Revisions
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2011, 09:14:56 pm »
Tasha:
Thank you. :)

Keirai:
Yeah, that's why I tried to hide it behind the mane haha.
I've been trying very hard to fix that eye, but gave up in the end. It'll take time.
Glad you like the legs though! Thank you. ^^

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Re: Vee's Revisions
« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2011, 09:24:00 pm »
Hmm, this drawing looks very nice. I just noticed one thing. It feels like the nose  or maybe even the muzzle look abit too much like it's from the front. If it was slightly more in profile I think it would suit better with the rest :3 But nut badz
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Re: Vee's Revisions
« Reply #5 on: January 07, 2011, 09:36:49 pm »
Thank you very much Red! It's a mistake that had not gone unnoticed and I'll try to improve it next time. :)

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« Reply #6 on: January 07, 2011, 09:39:02 pm »
Yesh, keep up the good workz. Couldn't have done better maiself.
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Re: Vee's Revisions
« Reply #7 on: January 07, 2011, 10:41:31 pm »
Wow... from the comments, I feel noobish, that's an AMAZING drawing though my eyes. I thought the face was awkward, but I thought it was the other eye. It feels kinda side-view. *-*

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Re: Vee's Revisions
« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2011, 02:05:49 am »
This is great. ('scept for the face, seems a bit awkward to me. No offense or anything.)

-was this on paper or on computer?

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Re: Vee's Revisions
« Reply #9 on: January 08, 2011, 04:58:55 am »
nice!! I like how ya do the paws