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Offline Wolfish Grin

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S.O.S.
« on: November 24, 2011, 01:26:49 am »
It's such a shame there are hardly any poems here...

S.O.S.

~I'm singing alone, my soul cryin' out.
Always a hollow bone, always left in doubt...

~I'm falling apart, barely breathing.
With a heart, torn & bleedin'...

~Crying through rain, hiding from fears.
Dying from pain, choking with tears...

~Holding on by a thread, but it's coming undone.
Standing in a sea that's turning red; fighting a battle that can't be won...

~Reaching for a hand that's just not there; reaching out, but grabbing thin air.
I feel like dying, give me some slack, 'cause how far I've fallen, there's no turning back...

~Caught in a flood, my life's a mess.
Surrounded in blood, someone save me...

...S.O.S...
« Last Edit: February 17, 2012, 05:37:58 am by WolfishGrin~(AVT) »
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Re: S.O.S.
« Reply #1 on: December 15, 2011, 12:31:19 pm »
....Amazing. That's all there is to it. Amazing.
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Re: S.O.S.
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2012, 12:31:13 pm »
I loved it, its very good. I wish my poetry skills were just as good ;)
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Re: S.O.S.
« Reply #3 on: January 18, 2012, 01:44:58 am »
Thanks guys! I appreciate the positive comments! ^^
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Re: S.O.S.
« Reply #4 on: February 18, 2012, 11:41:08 pm »
Nice job...not as good as mine, though...



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