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My poems(so far only sad)
« on: February 19, 2012, 01:09:50 am »
You said that you would stay,
And everything will be ok,
but then you whispered in my ear,
something I did not want to hear,
You said that you had to go,
But all I said was no,
Although I knew you had no choice,
I couldn't explain through my voice,
So I made this poem about you,
For everything we used to do,
For everything we did together,
And I wish you could stay forever,
But every book has an end,
So I say "good bye" my best friend.



This poem is to a best friend, who is leaving to another country, I couldn't say good bye without crying, so I made this poem to tell him I will never forget him, and I will always think of him.

I loved you as a friend,
or maybe even more?
as you turned around the bend,
I was this sad before,
You turned and waved good bye,
before you disappeared from sight,
I really wanted to die,
And not live through this fight,
It was when my tears fell,
That I new you were now gone,
we knew eachother so well,
~to be continued~
« Last Edit: March 31, 2012, 09:03:09 am by Kaehio(Laura) »

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Re: My First Poem(sad)
« Reply #1 on: February 19, 2012, 01:34:48 am »
It's beautiful :)
I had to move away from my hometown over the summer between 6th and 7th grade. I know what
it's like to feel like that :/ But, it's a very
pretty poem
<3

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Re: My First Poem(sad)
« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2012, 09:32:45 am »
thank you, I'm sorry your friend had to leave too

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Re: My poems(so far only sad)
« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2012, 03:46:52 am »
I love the poem :D

I had to move from Australia to another country, leaving all my friends behind :( I miss them very much :'(
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