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« on: May 14, 2016, 10:09:35 am »


butterflies

my mother always said,
"if they make you feel butterflies, run.
you need someone who makes you feel like home is nowhere
but between their arms"
she would love you.
 


untitled.

like a string of christmas lights
i am forced to recognize your absence
barely a broken bulb
i cannot glow
without you
 


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ps. this is forever a wip. i'll be updating regularly, whenever the muse hits.

 

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Re: poetry
« Reply #1 on: May 14, 2016, 11:11:17 am »
Ah, this is lovely!
I love your mother's quote :)
It's very unique and beautiful!
I'll look forward to see more from you here!
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Re: poetry
« Reply #2 on: May 14, 2016, 04:39:05 pm »
That quote is lovely..~
I really like these , hope to see more soon. Keep up the lovely work. c;

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Re: poetry
« Reply #3 on: May 14, 2016, 05:41:26 pm »
Ahh I love this!<3 Very beautiful.
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Re: poetry
« Reply #4 on: May 14, 2016, 09:20:56 pm »
These are very cool, Polar. ^_^ Keep it up.