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Offline CosmoFursi

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My Dear
« on: March 26, 2017, 11:36:01 am »
My Dear,

i know you're sad...

i know they've gone...

but dont you fear...

i'm still here...

i won't leave...

don't feel bad...

don't be sad...

it will all be okay.


My Dear,

don't you fret...

don't you regret...

the time you spent...

together...

now they're gone...

but i'm still here...

i'm still here...

and don't you fear the dark.


My Dear,

it's just life...

but you're alright...

i'm still here, My Dear.


So don't you cry, My Dear...

They wouldn't want you sad, My Dear...

You have me, My Dear...

They're still here...

In your heart...

My Dear...





i am so sorry, yasa. i know how hard it is, losing Noodles and Josephina.

but you have me to comfort you.

even though i'm in Thailand right now.

just two more days until i head home.

stay safe for me.
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Re: My Dear
« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2017, 01:13:19 pm »
Beautifully crafted poem, Cosmo! The use of imperative sentences at the beginning of some of the lines really makes the poem so powerful with a voice of its own. Keep up the wonderful work!
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Re: My Dear
« Reply #2 on: March 26, 2017, 02:30:13 pm »
Having a bad day, and this easily made me cry. Its very beautiful.
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Re: My Dear
« Reply #3 on: March 26, 2017, 02:42:08 pm »
This is beautiful. I'm sure Yasamin will think it's lovely as well. She's lucky to have you as her friend.
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Re: My Dear
« Reply #4 on: March 26, 2017, 06:59:26 pm »
I love this poem.
Please come back soon.
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Re: My Dear
« Reply #5 on: March 26, 2017, 07:47:17 pm »
This is beautiful Cosmo. I dare to say even I had a tear in my eye. Lovely job. And I'm really sorry about Noodles and Josephina Yasa. :c
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Re: My Dear
« Reply #6 on: March 26, 2017, 07:55:34 pm »
What a sweet little poem Cosmo! Thank you for sharing this with us. I'm sure Yasamin really appreciates it.
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