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Walk Apart
« on: March 18, 2018, 08:35:04 pm »
Did you ever think,
We would walk apart?
You have to much of a place in my heart, and
If I walk away from you you call me like a lark,
If I'm in the shadows you save me from the dark.

Did you ever think,
We would walk apart?
You have to much of a place in my heart, so
If you walk away from me I must summon you back,
And when you're in the shadows I will always have your back.

Love did you ever wonder,
(When you where younger)
And did you ever mourn,
A dark and grey morning;
A wild crying horn?

Love did you ever consider
(When we where not together)
That an eagle could swoop,
On a grey dawn?
The one person who joined later then the first day of time.

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Re: Walk Apart
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2018, 09:15:56 pm »
Beautifully written. The repetition is used in quite a nice way, calling to mind some kind of resurfacing of events. A little sweet and a little somber.

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