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A Random Depressing Poem (Sorry don't have a good title for it)
« on: December 11, 2017, 01:20:37 am »
I suck at poetry but oh well I have to right my feelings somewhere so I will hopefully feel better. I don't know of what to title this so sorry that my "poem" has no official title...


I have been shunned, I have been bullied, my heart crushed by many.

Why do I care, it only tears deeper, where are the ones who should be there.

My life rejected, my soul broken, yet I still seem to care.

As long as the road maybe I will keep fighting, I will keep trying suffer long and it will set me free.

The dark tunnel is said to have a light at the end, does this mean I am blind.

I refuse to let the hell drag me down into misery, save me...

For if not found I will be lost, if not saved I will be left in frost.

Heart as cold as stone, caring about nothing, this is not me.

This is not the me I would want to be.

Save me. I will keep going, I will keep fight, suffering will set me free.

-Kurai

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Re: A Random Depressing Poem (Sorry don't have a good title for it)
« Reply #1 on: December 11, 2017, 04:47:38 am »
Very sad poem indeed

I hope this doesn't reflect at all any feelings in your life <3

Either way it's very express and emotional. Well written

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Re: A Random Depressing Poem (Sorry don't have a good title for it)
« Reply #2 on: December 11, 2017, 03:33:22 pm »
Very sad poem indeed

I hope this doesn't reflect at all any feelings in your life <3

Either way it's very express and emotional. Well written

Sadly it does, I wrote this when I was depressed to release my feelings. Though I am in a much better mood right now at least. I wish it did not reflect how I feel in real life.