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« on: October 20, 2013, 11:49:48 am »
145 years old!?!? Let me just say...that he can help me with my history work!! All joking aside.. I like the character. Looks wise I like the choice of colours. They compliment each other and the light on darks really stands out in a good way. His body shape is clean, as in not out of control by adding this that and the other thing. And I must say that the tufts of fur on his legs really works for him.
On to himself as a character...
You supplied quite a long backstory and description to this character which I must say is a green flag. Everyone loves a well developed character. I can see how the confusion of who he is drove him to feel enraged and confused, I can also see that he was cheated from having his own life and was stuck in this other wolves shadow....a wolf that died 300 years prior. I like how you gave this a mythological feel, and made the character look like a god to the readers. Unlike a good however he is not immortal and has his limits, for example he cannot run the speed of light. It's good to see someone not over powering a character for once. All and all I must say I like this character, and can't wait to see him wandering around feral heart!