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Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« on: January 03, 2013, 03:58:26 pm »
A black wolf with emerald eyes lay in the middle of a flower-filled meadow, his emerald eyes glittering in the moonlight. His mate Jade, the queen was expecting three pups. He wondered what his beautiful pups would look like, he snapped back to reality as he heard a familiar voice. "Hello, my lovely Riahn. How are things?" Riahn whipped around and he seen his beautiful copper mate walk over to him. "I feel that the time is soon for the giving of the princes or princesses. I will be ready, they'll be gorgous, Riahn, like you." Riahn's heart swelled with pride as he looked into Jade's eyes. "They'll shine as bright as you, my love." Before Jade could reply, a pale orange tigress with amber eyes padded into view. "I have a prophecy, your majesty."

"Lilly, I was expecting you here. What is it you'd like to tell me?" Riahn replied.

Lilly murmured as she gazed not at any of the royals but towards the sky.

"Upoun a bloodred sky he howls,
Like wind stirs the trees,
On the game of chess,
Black wages war on White,

The girl who was wise,
Turned her back on us,
Don't push your wishes high,
The storm is nigh,

Set the shadow to the storm,
As the clovers bristle through the love meadow,
The rain'll never stop as lightning passes by,
Until the Four will stop the army of Black."

Riahn's ear twitched. What the stars was that supposed to mean? He asked his aid pleadingly. "Do you have a single clue of what it would mean, Lilly?"

The pretty tigress shook her head and spoke. "No, i'm sorry, I haven't got a clue." The tigress padded off deep into her thoughts.

Riahn exchanged glances with Jade. This meant something important! Riahn shook his head as he watched the sun rise with his mate, wondering if the prophecy was such a big deal....


(I hope you liked it, it's based off of a roleplay called The Aerialin Pride that I created, now for the copyrights:

Riahn, Lilly,the prophecy and the RP was created by ME!

Jade belongs to Thrillex ONLY!

DON''T STEAL!

Tell me what you like about it and what I need to improve on! :D)



« Last Edit: January 04, 2013, 12:50:14 pm by angela,., »

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #1 on: January 03, 2013, 10:53:26 pm »
I don't think it needs any improvement, this is another story I shall be following, +1 floof!
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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #2 on: January 03, 2013, 11:02:51 pm »
Yay it's up! And wow beautiful story.. I loved it! surplus!

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #3 on: January 04, 2013, 01:42:46 am »
Yay! Thanks Forest and Thrill! :D xxx

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #4 on: January 04, 2013, 01:49:57 am »
You're welcome, I would love to see more!

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2013, 01:54:59 am »
Maybe i'll get started in the morning... or possibly even now if I have time. >:3

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« Reply #6 on: January 04, 2013, 01:55:49 am »
Okay

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #7 on: January 04, 2013, 12:50:35 pm »
Chapter two~

A snow leopard with the eyes of dark green held a cougar slightly smaller than him in his jaws. "Argh! Get off me you rabbit-brained idiot!" snarled the cougar, his amber eyes gleaming with hatred for the leopard.

"Oh, shut up! You're going to speak with Riahn, sir." growled the leopard, his claws unsheathed, ready to strike if the hostile cougar attacked.

Riahn? the cougar thought, his eyes glowing with interest.

Garin dropped the cougar as a muscular black wolf with emerald eyes pad into the clearing. He spoke in a deep but caring voice. "Well done, Garin. This is your first arrest, I am pleased that you were fast enough to catch him. As for you, thief," the black male turned his emerald gaze to the cougar. "What is your name?"

Hanso growled, his fur bristling. "Why should I tell you?"

Riahn rolled his eyes and barked. "Just tell us, you arrogant feline!"

Hanso was taken aback and he murmured: "Hanso Ibsilim, Hanso for short."

Riahn nodded and he smiled. "Better, now Garin would you mind showing the cougar the prisions? Tell him that there are cubs and pups to be fed!"

Garin nodded, pleased and batted the thief with unsheathed claws. Garin's claws made Hanso wince with pain as he walked on. Hanso was thrown with in a muddy burrow, his silver fur splattered with icky brown mud. He HATED getting his fur wet. God, why are people so complicated these days? he wondered bitterly, his tail twitching with annoyance.

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #8 on: January 04, 2013, 06:24:28 pm »
Lovely story so far! I am enjoying reading this and I definitely look forward to more :3 I love that you're mixing felines and canines in the story and that it's not just about wolves. And the prophecy poem is so flowing and mysterious. I really love it :)

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #9 on: January 04, 2013, 06:51:41 pm »
As Suragaha said, wonderful story! I find it interesting, and again, the mix of canidea and felidea is awesome
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