Feral Heart

Everything was silent as the conifer trees blowed in the breeze.  A grey angel she-wolf sat in the meadow,her blue eyes gleaming in the moonlight. The wolf's amulet jingled as wind activated it. "Activate you piece of junk!"  she pawed at it. The glow started to shine brighter as the grey wolf smiled, howled to the moon as the amulet shone into the night. "Well Vesperia," she said to herself. "After centuries you finally got that thing to work!" Now I can go to Crystal Haven and see my family!

Yup! It's done for now what's happening basically is that Vesperia the angel wolf is stuck in the middle of nowhere and tries to fiind her way home.  Hope you like it and tell me what i need to improve on

Hewwo everyone i'm gonna present my angel wolf,Vesperia. Here is her bio:
Name: Vesperia
Gender: Female
Age 15
Species: Heaven wolves
Mate:  none
Pup: Snowy (adopted)
Best buddy: Utuskushi  (goddess wolf,not mine she belongs to V.Big bunny)
                                                       Appearence: silver body with brown mane and blue eyes. Angel wings battle-scarred body with golden earrings.
Backstory: Vesperia as a child got chased from her home because Demon wolves raided the heavens and she fell from the sky and landed on earth. She grew up alone with her hunting and fighting  :Pskills to support her. When she was 14 she met Utuskushi and became friends with her until Nyroc,a fallen angel wolf captured Utuskushi and Vesperia and wanted their souls. Vesperia and Utuskushi did not back down and battled boldy with Nyroc. Utuskushi escaped but Vesperia got transformed into Demonica which is now vesperia's dark side. She turned back into Vesperia but Demonica still lay in her mind and is waiting for her chance to strike...... (DUNDUNDUNNNNNN)