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Introduction / Hello again..
« on: March 20, 2017, 10:11:39 am »
Hey everyone, I'm an old member from the years of Yore. I'm coming back to say hello and I'm sad to see that Kovu still hasnt returned.Yet an update has rolled out, im honestly interested in coming back.

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Game Discussion / No updates?
« on: April 02, 2015, 03:41:02 am »
I've been gone for quite some time now, and i have come back because i have decided that i miss this old game, but when i check the download it says the game hasnt been updated since 2011! Is this the truth?

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Stories / ~Requiem of Shared Sorrows~
« on: July 19, 2014, 06:17:36 pm »
~Requiem of Shared Sorrows~
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Prologue
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Kazuma was staring out the window from his seat at the back of the class as he often does with his music in his ears drowning out the world outside. He was staring at a butterfly that lands on the windowsill every so often. Inside his classrom the students were chatting with one another happily, but he wasnt much of a talkative PERSON. Out of the corner of his vision he noticed the other students packing up their bags, so he decided to do the same. When he bent over to pick up his bag from underneath his chair one of his earbuds fell out and he heard the teacher speaking
"-doesn't show up gets an F!" She said in a cheerful voice. He starts searching teh board to see if anything on there could explain what she is talking about, but it had just recently been erased. So he decided to ask his classmate instead
"Hey Tomoki." Tomoki is one of the few PEOPLE that Kazuma can call his friend he was short with blond hair and green eyes
"Yah man?" his voice was a little higher than average "Need something?" Kazuma leans in a bit closer so his teacher wont hear him
"I wasn't paying attention," he explains with a puzzled look on his face, "what are we showing up to?" Tomoki gives him a wide smirk and teases
"Thinking about Kurumi again!?" Kurumi had been Kazuma's childhood friend since kindergarden.
"As if man!" he flicks Tomoki upside the head, "But seriously, I have no idea where we are supposed to go"
"Oh right, the teacher is taking us to Kyoto tomorrow, were supposed to meet up by the track." It's right about then that the school bell rang and the class errupted into chaos, those with clubs were out the door at mach speed, everyone else was just trying to not get trampled. Since they were on the first floor Kazuma decided to just go out the WINDOW
"Later Tomoki!" He gave is friend a half-hearted wave and then started off towards the front of the school, it was a long walk home and he had to use the rest-room.
As he was washing his hands he took a look in the mirror, Kazuma is slightly taller than average with dirty blond hair and crystal blue eyes. Upon closer inspection he noticed that there was something carved on the wall behind him "H T A E D" death. As part of the student COUNSEL it is his job to keep the campus clean.
"Why couldn't they have just used sharpie like a normal person?" he groaned as he pulls out his cell phone and dials the custodian. After four rings the other end picks up
"Hello?" his voice was raspy and worn out. It must be the old night janator. I can't make the old man fix a wall he thought to himself.
"Oh sorry, wrong number!" he swiftly hit the end button and put away his cell phone and began walking out of the bathroom, but he didnt reach to door before his cellphone rang agin. He picked up on the third tine "Hello?"
"Hello sir, is this Kazuma Atsushi?" his voice sounded sad and very worn down
"Yes sir it is, may I ask who is calling?" his response was swift, making his next words all the more believable
"I'm detective Tachibana. I'm afraid theres been a murder.... Your parents are dead." The words cut into him like blades of ice, his whole body went numb, the phone dropped from his hand. And he couldn't help but look at the words carved into wall. After gathering his phone he ran as fast as he could, bringing himself to exahstion.
When he finally arived at his home the entire building was a smoldering pile of rubble. A man he assumed was detective Tachibana approached him and began speaking, but none of the words were reaching them, all he could do was stare at the building and the body bags. There were two of them, one for his father and one for his mother....
"Wait, where's my sister!?" he looked back and forth, but she was nowhere to be seen.
"You have a sister?" the man looked at him as if he had gone mad but instead of arguing he pull out his wallet and grabbed the photo of his familly on it was a picture of his younger sister, her hair a firey red tied in twintails with white ribbons her eyes a reddish brown to match her hair
"That's my sister, is she okay?!" the detective looked at him and just shook his head
"These are the only two we found, I'm sorry." the detective grabbed ahold of his shoulder and said, "But dont worry, we have a place for you to live. From now on you will be living at Blue Cross Orphanage!"

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Stories / ~Requim of Shared Sorrows~ Character 2 Kazuma Atsushi
« on: July 18, 2014, 06:44:19 am »
This is a continuation of my first post, and is still centered around humans any styles portrayed in the introduction

Kazuma is a regular highschool student of the age 15, that is until the day he comes home to find his parents dead, and his beloved younger sister defiled and then also killed. Due to these events, he was forced to move to an Orphanage and a new school. He has brown hair and crystal blue eyes and a slightly muscular build. When he first arived at the school, people wouldnt leave him alone, they wanted to know more about him and kept asking him tons of questions, and he answered them like any other student would, if not a little more calm. But then someone asks him the question "What does your father do?" and his mood suddenly turns sullen. he stands up and leaves the classroom on the verge of tears and tries to find a quiet place to be alone, and on his search he come across the Art room where he meets a mysterious girl, who was just as surprised to see him there as he was. He finds the corner of the room and sits down and just sulks there for a long while, but eventually he began to speak.

I look up from my hands to see that strange girl painting again, what she was painting i couldnt yet tell, but it looked human, and i could see allot of red in the picture. I stood and walked towards a wall, leaning on it and placing my right foot on the wall behind me as i spoke. "Whats your name?" the girl gives me a sidelong glance, but doesnt answer my question, and I'm starting to get irritated. I walk up closer and ask once more "Who are you?" only this time slightly more demanding. She looks at me dead on this time and i finally see her entire face, and i am cought entirley breatheless, she is beautiful.
  
  "It's rude not to introduce yourself first." her voice smooth as silk and as seductive as it is venomous. Even with that tough act I cant help but notice that she cant keep steady eye contact and she looks kind of scared.
  i start to come back with a remark but think better of it, "My bad, my name is Kazuma Atsushi." even with a formal introduction she still looks uncomfortable
  Her gaze shifts a small bit and she looks me in the eye. "My name is Reika." and then adds defiently, "Go back to class."


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Characters / ~Requim of Shared Sorrows~ Character 1 Reiko Shizuka
« on: July 18, 2014, 06:21:32 am »
Please note that this is a character design for a HUMAN story that i am writing, but please feel free to use her as a wolf character if you see fit. And if you liked my character please be sure to smash that +Floof button for me!  

Reiko is a 16 year old High school student who lives alone after watching her parents brutal death. she has dark blue hair silverey eyes and an A-Cup chest. Since being exposed to such a dark reality Reiko tends to stay isolated, she locks herself away in the art room when ever it isnt being used and she paints many beautiful paintings, one of her most famous is a drawing of a dark black butterfly with bright blue bottom wings  and blue circles on the upper wings (is a real butterfly) which is held in the schools trophy case. Most students avoid the art room and Reiko because many claim that she is a ghost. she has a tendancy to walk in the rain without an umbrella and thus she sometimes walks around with wet clothing. she harbers a brutal hatred for most of man kind, but she hates adults most of all, she sees them as "Tainted people who find joy in bringing others misery". She rarely speaks to anyone, and when she does it is usually just to tell them to leave her alone, her voice is beautiful almost hypnotic to the ear, deep for a womans yet seductive in tone. She has been living all on her own for three years now and sleeps at a local Orphanage, though she only goes there from midnight to 8 AM the rest is spent on school grounds (they dont lock the gates because the headmaster would hate to leave her stranded outside the school) She often pushes people away becasue she doesnt want to be hurt ever again, even if that means that she has shout. but if one insists on being in the art room she cannot bring herself to say no. She is very mature for her age and acts like a 30 year old.

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Characters / Eminon
« on: May 30, 2014, 09:39:18 pm »
"You scum! How could you do that to her!?" the dark wolf could only laugh at the pitiful whelp, the laugh was dark and filled with the chill of death. "You Monster! What did she ever do to you!?" he was referencing to the She-wolf who was lying there, half decayed and struggling to live without one of her lungs. Her only sin was being alive and a soon to be mother.
  "You want to know why?"his voice was so dark and twisted, and it sounded like it was coming from every where at once.
  "Yes please! What did she do!?
 his voice bubbled with a darkness that would scare the devil himself "Her existence was an insult to my being. Having children in a world like this is difficult isn't it? Why don't we just say that I've done you a favor?"
The young wolf couldn't believe what her was hearing. How could Murdering the woman i love possibly help me!? "Are you insane!?" his eyes were shaking and he could hardly stand. "Who are you?" the wolf asked, his voice trembling with unbridled fear.
The dark wolf laughed evilly, his laughter causing the ground bellow them to shake at his bellow. "My name is Eminon! I am the Lich! King of Necromancers! Now Perish before my might!" He howls a dark and twisted howl, and with it, rise over three thousand fold of Undead Wolves nearly a third of his Legion! and one, colossus wolf rises and they begin to charge the wolf, and teh city just beyond. "YOU ALL WILL SERVE ME IN THE UNDEATH!"

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Characters / Karnon, The Earth Lord
« on: April 22, 2014, 01:09:54 am »
Karnon, the "Master of the Earth". what a joke, he was no hero, he was no savior, he was a monster! He has the power to completely manipulate the earth, vines, any type of plantlife, but the one catch, is that his powers drive him to the brink of insanity. I've seen him use it, my mother, my father, they were being assaulted, nearly murdered, when suddenly a dark vine impaled the assailants..... but then... instead of asking if we were alright, he opened a rift below my parents and murdered them. His fur was a dark black, with radiant green eyes, and when his powers were unleashed, green celtic symbols glow upon his fur. No one but I have seen his face and survived, he is a monster, and does not want to socialize, he will Kill you, do not trust him.

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Hey guys, This is a very Dark RP, and there is never a bright side, just dark and horrendous madness. want to be a part of it? Then go ahead, this is an open RP for any one to join into, and great RP will be put into the story.

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Stories / Land of the Black Ones, Decay's Plot.
« on: April 05, 2014, 05:49:57 am »
Prologue (So before we start, if you haven't read the character bios for the listed names please do so.) Within the dark forests of An'teros, there are seven packs of pure sin, each just as terrible as the one before. They all fight for one creature, an immortal being that has nearly no fighting power within him but has been known to heal any wound simply by touching them. For many years they have fought, seeking immortality, but such a gift does not come free! Since he was bestowed his power, Decay has felt nothing but pure wretchedness from all of those who surround him. The story begins in the pride pack, one of the most powerful packs of them all, mainly due to Decay's power.


Chapter OneIt was dark, that was all he could think of through the unbearable pain. He could remember strange thing about his life, he remembered hymns that his mother used to sing to him as a child, but most else was a blank. but he could remember one thing, one thing that was very important My name...... what is it? He racked his brain, constantly on the tip of his tongue. He looked up, or at least, what he thought was up, and he could see little sparkling dots upon the horizon, he realized that it was night, which explains why he couldn't see. He attempted to walk, and found that his legs would hold him, but were very weak. Where am I? was all that he could think at the moment, he was in a completely new place, so different from the strangely twisted landscape of his home. He heard a rustling, and noticed that he was no longer alone. Three wolves emerged from the brush, two of them dragging a wolf who was badly wounded, his throat  gashing blood, the mark of a Gnasher. How do I know what that is? He had so many questions, and no answer to accompany them. Without thinking he approached the wolves, and the immediately rose their hackles.
"S-stay back!" the wolf who spoke seemed young, much younger than him, and he seemed scared.
Forgetting that he had the ability to speak he spoke up "I do not seek to harm you, I just want to help." his voice was rough, almost painful to hear, like he wasn't used to talking.
The other wolf spoke up this time "Yea'? And Whaht can Ye' do fer him eh!?" his voice had a thick accent to it and was smooth on the ears.
He couldn't really explain it himself, but he felt like he HAD to save him, and that he had the power to do so "I-I Don't really know, but I feel like I could help" he paused for a moment. "Please?"
It was the foreign wolf that spoke up, obviously the one respected more "A'ight, Ye' have tree minutes, if Ye' don't save him, I'mma skin you live!" He said this with a grin, knowing full well that the wolf was long dead, and only allowing this to feed his own blood lust.
He walked up to the dead wolf's corpse, and touched his wet nose to the corpse's dry one. What happened next cannot be truly explained; the spilled blood began to literally flow backing into his throat, then the neck began to seal back up, but as this was happening, the brave wolf who offered to save him began to have his own throat opening, as if by magic, then when the dead wolf finally was whole again, he began to stir, just as the blood began to flow out of the courageous wolf. He convulsed on the floor for about twenty minutes, then his own would healed, and he returned to consciousness.
The formerly dead wolf was looking over him, not one emotion shown by his face. "What is your name?" His voice was cold steel, betraying no emotion.
This was a question he had asked himself many times, but a single word floated in his mind, and he chose that for his name. "My name is Decay" His scratchy voice making the name sound almost sinister.
"Well 'Decay'" began the wolf "My name is Ska'lun and you shall be our honored guest!"
The two wolves from before grabbed him and dragged him for what seemed to be miles, then he was thrown into a stone cage, in which he gave up on the life he lived, and fell into a deep sleep that lasted for five days.


Thank you all for your support on reading this, this is only a chapter for my first character Decay, I already have two other coming soon (Guardian and Agony) and plan on releasing many in the future, this is only chapter one of Decay's story, it will continue. Please leave your comments bellow!

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Characters / Agony
« on: April 05, 2014, 03:28:30 am »
No one really knows where Agony came from, but it is said that all the pain and anguish formed a single entity, and that being was Agony. Anyone who has ever heard a whisper of this monster fears his destructive force, you see when he gets angry, or feels pain anything around him becomes his deadly tool. He uses his blood as a whip, and uses them to reach trees, and if he isn't bleeding, he can unleash a mail-storm, a destructive bass filled sub-sonic sound that destroys whole forests within a square mile. But Agony is actually a kind hearted creature, he hates the fight, but cannot control his powers, he has a split personality, and when threatened, it completely takes over, and will slaughter anything in his path. He is completely broken, he is scared of himself and others, but there is one who he trusts with all his soul, his polar opposite, Guardian who protects him when ever he can.

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