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Spot the mistake!
« on: August 17, 2013, 10:23:02 am »
So, this game is basically what the title says. All you have to do is write a short paragraph about anything but also include one clearly deliberate mistake. The next person will have to point out the mistake! So, here is an example:

The cat walked up to the fenssss.

Did you see it there? Well, it would be more fun if it was a bit longer that that, just to make it harder for people! And, the person that created the hardest mistake will be the winner! I will decide the winner every month or so, but sadly there won't be any prizes.
I'm not gonna start, just coz mine will probably be too easy and I'm too lazy to do it anyway xD.

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2013, 11:43:50 am »
Heres mine:

Heyo floofies! I'm EpicWolfie! You know i have lots of fun on this forum. Its really nice to meet new peeps around here. I also enjoy playing the game. Its really satisfying to roleplay. I like it. Yeah.



The end.



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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2013, 11:49:10 am »
Is it that the 'i' wasn't capitalized?

Spot the the mistake:
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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #3 on: August 17, 2013, 11:57:34 am »
You said 'the' twice!

I used to have a cat called Chiko, he was a black and white cat and lived with us for fourteen years! But then, we moved house and let our next door neighbours have Cheeko, we now have a kitten named Suzie and a ginea pig named Bobbie.

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #4 on: August 17, 2013, 12:00:08 pm »
You spelt the cats name 'Chiko' the first time, then 'Cheeko' the second!

I have five dogs, Ben, Angle, Moose and Scruffs.

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #5 on: August 17, 2013, 12:11:20 pm »
Is it that the 'i' wasn't capitalized?

Spot the the mistake:
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Yeah it was the i.

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #6 on: August 17, 2013, 12:39:59 pm »
You spelt the cats name 'Chiko' the first time, then 'Cheeko' the second!

I have five dogs, Ben, Angle, Moose and Scruffs.

You only put four names.

Dunno if jokes work...

One day, there was a cowboy riding his horse when he spotted a bar up ahead, and so he tied up his horse in the stables and walked into the bar. After getting a drink, he went back outside to mount his horse again when he realized it was missing. Angry, he stormed into the bar and took out his gun and fired it into the air to get everyone's attention. "Okay," he said when everyone had looked his way. "My horse is missing! If I don't get it back after I drink three (changing) Dr. Peppers, I'm going to have to do something that I would never want to do." And so after the cowbay drank three sodas, he went back out to find his horse. After seeing it there, he mounted it and began to head back to his ranch when the bar owner ran out to stop him. "What were you going to do if you didn't get your horse back?" At that question, the cowboy stopped and stared at the bar owner, before replying, "I would have to walk home."

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #7 on: August 17, 2013, 12:49:37 pm »
Chupacabra, Jersey Devil, Darmoor, Mothmn, Bigfoot, Yeti, Yowie, Flatwoods Mnster, Sheepsthc, Gtmn, Lochness Monster, Lou Ga Rou, Skin Walker, Lake Demon, Lake Man

Multiple in this one.

And above.... I don't know. Its a long story?

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #8 on: August 17, 2013, 12:56:22 pm »
Shall I give you the answer? Maybe I did make it too long...that was unexpected.

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And so after the cowbay drank three sodas, he went back out to find his horse.

Now can you spot it?

Chupacabra, Jersey Devil, Darmoor, Mothmn, Bigfoot, Yeti, Yowie, Flatwoods Mnster, Sheepsthc, Gtmn, Lochness Monster, Lou Ga Rou, Skin Walker, Lake Demon, Lake Man

I have no idea what these mythical creatures are, but I'm guessing you spelled "Monster" wrong? (Flatwoods Mnster).

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #9 on: August 17, 2013, 01:30:10 pm »
Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me :)

And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia