"Long Live The King," is the best title is "Dark Past" and "Simba's Dark Scars" don't really appeal for most readers and just give away the plot of the story in a heartbeat or gives the wrong image (i.e.: "oh boy, another angst fanfic.") I don't know but I love the little play of irony since Scar said it right before Mufasa's death. Both covers give away some plot of it. If you want to do something nice, why not have a black silhouette of Simba and have a creepy grin in the background? c: