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Poems / Re: HeartAche. (By Jordan Goldade dedicated to XxspiritmoonXx)
« on: December 20, 2013, 10:30:10 pm »
Thank you guys vey much for your kind comments :3 I will continue writing poems. (just a beginner)
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Poems / HeartAche. (By Jordan Goldade dedicated to XxspiritmoonXx)
« on: December 04, 2013, 04:41:53 am »
So many things happened between me and my girlfriend. I abandoned my old account starting fresh with this one. I wrote this for Her and I. Any comments or criticism feel free to share. thanks )))
HeartAche.
O, A heart so cruelly bashed and tore. What hath it been done which deserve of it? I see a flower swaying gently alone and I hear the mournful cry of something lost along the way, crying for the past as it once was, only an imagination of something that can not be reached. A gift of vast knowledge and intelligence, but the greatest gift is the love for someone. It bleeds out slowly dying while holding onto compassion, love, and the least bit of hope. Washed away slowly with tears, sorrow and grief. O Lord have mercy upon my soul.
((Love you spiritmoon,))
HeartAche.
O, A heart so cruelly bashed and tore. What hath it been done which deserve of it? I see a flower swaying gently alone and I hear the mournful cry of something lost along the way, crying for the past as it once was, only an imagination of something that can not be reached. A gift of vast knowledge and intelligence, but the greatest gift is the love for someone. It bleeds out slowly dying while holding onto compassion, love, and the least bit of hope. Washed away slowly with tears, sorrow and grief. O Lord have mercy upon my soul.
((Love you spiritmoon,))
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