I've illustrated the second story now(Half of it though; I'm working on the scene where they fly through space), and I've made edits to all three stories to fix things in them, and I've also added a note at the bottom of the main post.
I have also renamed most of the spaceships and one of the pilots. Sparrow is now Ronmin. Thunder is now Anvindr(Which I think means "Against the wind"). Petrel is now Ernesto. Bhaicer is now Gerolt. Luhuklag is now the name of the captain of Ronmin.
