I enjoyed reading this, and I love the different shots you got set up, it looks really professional. Are you going to make more?! Cos I want to know what happens next! Please? ;w;
Btw, you spell 'bologna' 'B-O-L-O-G-N-A.' Not 'B-a-l-o-n-e-y.' Whoever came up with the weird spelling should be shot. Seriously, there's no 'g' sound in 'Baloney.' Sorry, couldn't help, I wasn't gonna mention it, but I'm a grammar Nazi >A<