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1. FeralHeart Username: toxicwolf9876
2. Character Name: SnowHeart
3. Desired Clan: Mistclan
4. Desired Position: Warrior
5. Something about your character (personality, picture, backstory, and such): Snowheart since she was born was a really shy kitten and she couldn't defend herself since she was weak and didn't knew how to hunt and attack, she also was a loner since her parents died when she was born. When she was an apprentice she met Adderstar, the leader of mistclan, Adderstar teached her how to hunt and protect herself from other wild cats, she was a really brave warrior and she kinda would be mean & friendly to others, she didn't made alot of friends when she was an apprentice and she was often bullied by other cats in the clan.


6. RP Sample:

Snowheart would watch from the top of the mountain alone with the wind blowing around her, she wished she was like ones of these cats who haves alot of friends and were brave warriors. She said whispering to herself "I wish i could be liked like others do." as she slowly shed a tear, She came back to her clan walking around slowly with her ears in the back afraid. Night was falling and she had to hunt & other missions, she ran faster than other cat would to do it fast before a wild cat appears and attacks her, when she was going back to her clan walking she heard a loud noise in the forest. She refused to check, when she saw the leader wasn't there and alot of cats were afraid & scared about what happened to Adderstar, she was the only one who had to check around the forest, she slowly walked afraid and terrified trying to find her, the wind was blowing so hard but she still had to find her, she wouldn't give up. She got shocked when she saw cats were attacking here, she couldn't do anything but watch as she was terrified, she shed a tear slowly falling in the ground, she told herself to go there but she declined it alot of times but she did it, the claws of her paws attacked the wild cats strong, she left the cats bleeding in the ground. As the day was coming she was excited for her new name, the bravest warrior in the clan.

(sorry for my english it's not my first lenguage)

Eye Color: Blue
Fur color: White & grey
Markings: Scars around her legs or body
Ears color: grey
Tail tip: grey

Afraid of: shadows, wild strong cats

Appearence:


(Credit for original artist)

Gender: She-cat (female)
Age: 17 moons (16 years old)
Siblings: (doesn't haves yet)
Parents: Coldheart x thunderstar
Brothers: (doesn't haves yet)

Friends: ~~
enemies: ~~

Dislikes: annoying people & animals,kits,mosquitoes
Best skills: Hunting & climbing
Fighting style: Wind moves

(also i made an account and it's pending i think)
hope i get accepted!

Accepted ^^

Though I have some notes to your overall auditions; your character's father cannot be someone named Thunderstar, who is likely a leader of one of the Clans. This cannot be approved, as some lines of leaders have been already created and are considered canon to the Rising Dawn universe. There's no cat named Thunderstar, and it would require some permission to have a character related to one of those. Also, what are "wind moves?" The roleplay is realistic, and cats can only use some realistic attacks, not elemental powers or something. Though I believe that we can solve these details in the regular group chat.

I approved your site account. So you can go there and read everything important. Add MCW into the character's name and send a joining request to Rising Dawn. I'll approve it as soon as I get to the recruiter.

See you in-game! ^^

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1. FeralHeart Username: violetwallflower
2. Character Name: Toadslip
3. Desired Clan: Mistclan
4. Desired Position: Warrior
5. Something about your character (personality, picture, backstory, and such): Toadslip is a brown marble tabby with small tufts on her ears and her build is fairly muscular with slightly long legs.  She received the name Toadslip due to an incident where she slid off a rock and landed on one of her clanmates during a patrol. A proud cat by nature, she has yet to get over the embarrassment she feels over her name. Although as arrogant as she can be she rarely holds a grudge against her clan and is apologetic when she realizes she's in the wrong. She often frets over the kittens, but she would never want to take on an apprentice, claiming 'they're too much work'.
6. RP Sample
'...Toadslip stalked through the marsh, all senses on edge for the slightest hint of prey. With leafbare approaching she was worried about the oldest and youngest members of her clan. She remembered the medicine cat talking about a particularly brutal one they had several moons ago. Several cats had caught greencough and many of the kits had died, causing a lack of young apprentices coming in to take the place of senior warriors heading to the elders' den. She hoped that history would not repeat itself...'


Accepted.

Add MCW into the name, and send a joining request to Rising Dawn. Also register onto the site; RisingDawn.boards.net. See you in-game ^^

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would i be able to join as a loner? ;3


1. FeralHeart Username
babystrit (cat account. my main account is SSFireWolf)

2. Character Name
Dusk (warrior name: Duskstorm)
she-cat
34 moons old
american shorthair
old character from a shut down group, warriors from dust

3. Desired Clan
N/A (will join creekclan later on ((will have learned to swim and get over her fear of water by then)) )

4. Desired Position
loner ;3 (warrior when clanned)

5. Something about your character (personality, picture, backstory, and such)
picture (preset/no preset):

if i can't have the manymuch mane, i can remove the mane items.

personality:


short backstory:
used to be part of a group of loners; they died/disappeared; started hanging out around a group of clans; then they also disappeared; is now wandering in search for another clan to join

fun-facts:
avoids rivers/lakes when she can; usually hangs out around the nicest clan (acts kinda like a warrior at times); used to talk a lot but doesn't anymore.

6. RP Sample
Dusk stretched out on a rock, letting the sun's rays warm her pelt and make it glow slightly. The feline was currently in the broken home of ElmClan, who had disappeared along with the other clans. She lifted her head at a twig snapping, only to find a mouse freeze when she looked at it. Dusk sighed before standing up, making the mouse run away. She made no attempt to go after it, and just looked around the area. /They're not coming back. Ashpelt and Robin were right./ she thought, faintly smiling at the thought of the two rogues that were her friends. Ashpelt and Robin had both been loners once, but a fire separated the two. Ashpelt had joined ElmClan, until an earthquake made her flee and reunite with Robin again. Dusk had found the two when Ashpelt came back to the territories, Robin in tow, only to find everyone gone and Dusk remaining.

The orange feline shook her head. No reason to stay in the past. She stared ahead of her and started running, deciding it was time for her to leave the broken territories finally.

(sorry it may be a bit bad. it has been a tiring day for me.)

if i'm unable to join as a loner, then i can whip up an application for a different cat ;3

Approved ^^

Though I have a small note towards your character; I am completely fine with your character being a member of a loner group. That is completely okay! Though, you described this group as if it were a Clan. According to the rules, players are unable to create other Clans for their biographies. Just change that, and otherwise I have nothing against that!

Add L into the character's name, and send a joining request to Rising Dawn. Also, register onto the site: RisingDawn.boards.net. I will approve the requests as soon as I get to them. c:

See you in-game ^^

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Hay thur, would like to throw in an application after signing up for the website. Did say I would contact ya via e-mail in my request message but my inbox is too messy and I don't really want to sort it out juuuust yet. So, this'll do!

FeralHeart Username
Kirk (side-account: Aetrix)

Character Name
Owltuft

Desired Clan
StormClan

Desired Position
Warrior

Something about your character
ingame (without preset)
ingame (with preset)
kinda-accurate IRL depiction

breed: Siberian Forest Cat
eye color: Blue
fur color: Light cream; off-white
marking color(s): Dark brown, black, grey
fur length: Long
brief backstory: Grew up normally within StormClan, helped raised his sister once their parents passed on.
brief personality: Paternal, easily angered when a touchy subject is brought up, though generally calm most of the time.

RP Sample
Owltuft had planned for today to be a day to laze around, soak up some sunshine on a rock, and perhaps eat a nice, plump mouse or two. But, of course, his warrior duties as well as his little sister yowling at him to get his fluffy tail up shattered such fanciful thoughts. A sigh escaped the tom's jaws; he playfully nipped at his sister's tail as she prepared to leap on him, causing her to squeak in surprise and hiss at him in indignation before skittering away. Owltuft, of course, laughed at this--even if she could be annoying, interacting with his sister was one of the few things that could bring a smile to his lips after an interrupted nap. He watched the dark brown kit for a few moments before rolling onto his stomach and pulling himself to his feet, shaking any dust or plant residue from his fur and giving it a couple quick licks to flatten it to the best of his ability. After doing so he stretched himself out, enjoying the sensation and sounds of his joints popping, and leaped off of the rock he was snoozing on to go strike up a conversation with the deputy to, perhaps, go out hunting or patrolling later in the day or whenever he was needed.


Approved!

Add SCW into your character's name and send a joining request to the in-game group: Rising Dawn

I also approved your site account, so you can go and read everything important there.

See you in-game ^^

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1. FeralHeart Username - WholockInCamelot

2. Character Name
- Brackenkit (Yes, I know it says you don't accept kits but my character has a mother. She wants to join, too. Her user is Kaalia)

3. Desired Clan
- StormClan

4. Desired Position - Kit (Again, he has a mother/queen already so no worries there)

5. Something about your character (personality, picture, backstory, and such)

 Backstory: Brackenkit was born to Finchfeather and Ashbreeze. He was born a loner and now, his mother is bringing him and his littermates (Lilykit, Elmkit, and Beekit) to StormClan, where she hopes they will thrive.

Picture (includes his mother, Finchfeather):  http://i.imgur.com/bdxubxs.jpg

Personality: Brackenkit is a ruddy brown tabby tom with warm yellow eyes. He has small, ragged tufts all over his pelt, causing him to appear perpetually annoyed.

And such: <3

6. RP Sample


Brackenkit tumbled from his nest, as he chased after his littermates. "Get back here, Beekit!" He squealed, his pelt bristling slightly. As he was suddenly picked up by his mother, and set down beside her, he looked up at her. He knew she couldn't hear him, but he spoke anyway. "Beekit was teasing me." He said, furrowing his brow as he saw his siblings tussling about. As he felt Finchfeather nudge him, he padded over and began playing once again.





1. Kaalia
2. FinchFeather
3. StormClan
4. Queen


5. Something about your character (personality, picture, backstory, and such)
My character is a brown tabby with blue eyes and currently a swollen stomach due to having had kits realitively recently. Finchfeather is deaf and so when her previous mate was trying to gain her trust he often had to bring her tokens of affection so she could understand what it was he wanted. The two became inseperable until she got pregnant. She has 4 kits, Lilykit, Brakenkit, Elmkit, and Beekit, all just around 1 and a half moons old.
6. RP Sample
Finchfeather smiled as she laid with her nursing kits. Her eyes fixated on the leaves above. She turned towards her kits a smile on her face. She desperately wished to tell them about her home. How she remembered her mother and father always playing with her. How her big brother was always bullied by her mother. She remembered the two playfully tagging his back and she couldn't help but enjoy the memories.
She looked at her kits, the eldest daughter, Lilykit was eagerly eating as quickly as she could. Instinctively the mother arched her head down towards the little one and nudged her to slow her down, she followed by calmly checking on each one of the kittens.
'I hope you all are as fit and healthy as you're supposed to be...' She thought worriedly as she knew her disability by the lack of sound in her world. She wasn't gonna treat her kits any different if she found out that they might be similar. She thought back to the their father, a tom named Ashbreeze. She remembered him spending hours looking for where flames had ravaged the land and finding ash just so he could convince her of his name. The world of sound was a mystery to her.
She sighed softly as she slowly groomed her half asleep and full bellied kits. She thought deeply about how seriously she adored each child of hers. How she wished Ash had been around to meet them and how she couldn't be more ecstatic to find out what they'd grow into being. She prayed StarClan would find them strong fit and healthy by their times.

Accepted both of you ^^

I also approved your site requests and group in-game requests. Though Finchfeather needs to add the in-game tag SCQ, and Brackenkit goes for SCK

See you in-game ^^

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@Elaysa I'm afraid I can't find your group ingame! I see a couple Rising Dawn groups, but its only Outsiders, Starclan, and Dark Forest. Nothing else!

The group is just purely named Rising Dawn, there should be something like that ^^

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1. FeralHeart Username - megatron_reigns
2. Character Name - Sweetwater
3. Desired Clan - Pitchclan
4. Desired Position - Warrior
5. Something about your character -
Sweet | Gentle | Keen to listen to Starclan | Loves kits
Sweetwater is infertile! She cant kit. :(
She loves laying in the cool morning grass when the dews have just settled, and finds that the stars being reflected on any surface is one of her favorite sights. She's always wanting to help cats as well, but don't be mistaken. She is one hell of a fighter if she needs to be.
6. RP Sample
Ears perked, the heavy set tabby looked out over the waters, Amber eyes gleaming in the dimming light. Night was falling, and slowly the sky was turning black. It wasn't log before the stars started to show, bright and beautiful as ever, as they reached across the skies. Tonight, amongst those of Silverpelt, stars were streaking across the sky in a dazzling display that sent shudders down Sweetwater's spine.

She always felt the call of the stars, and today - this display - she felt the urge to race across he moors with the stars above. A cold chill blew over her fur, and as quickly as it had come, the call disappeared. The brown tabby flicked her tail in irritation, eyes falling to the waters at her feet. To her surprise, the stars that fell above her, in the reflection they appeared to all disappear behind her own image. As if they were choosing her.

Fur prickled, before the tabby stepped away from the waters again, shaking her head to rid herself of her thoughts. She was no medicine cat. She knew nothing of what Starclan was doing. And so the molly turned away from the expanse to return to her home - her clan. That's where she was needed. Not here, daydreaming of being able to communicate with those stars above.

Approved. Add 'PCW' into your character's name, and send a joining request to Rising Dawn. I'll approve it as soon as I get to the recruiter.

See you in-game ^^

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FeralHeart Username: AprilGreenFlower
Character Name: Sparrowheart
Desired Clan: Stormclan
Desired Position: Deputy
Something about your character: She's hotheaded, and loyal. Has blue eyes, and a brown pelt mixed with darker browns, and blacks. Rather lithe, medium sized, leaning more on the tall side. Sparrow is twenty seven moons, and has lived in Stormclan her whole life. Her parents passed away due to malnutrition (during the winter), and she never had any siblings, because her only one was a stillborn.
RP Sample: The mist had crept upon her. It was nighttime; Stormclan was asleep, though due to it being winter time, and prey being scarce, Sparrowheart had decided to venture out of the camp to hunt. Her long, silky pelt kept her warm, though the chill of the night still seemed to bite at her, constantly. The moon had risen high in the sky, illuminating the forest perfectly for her. She reached the streams after a few moments of walking, and when her toes touched the edge of the water bank, she stared down into her reflection that rested on the crystalline water. She was completely captured by the azure eyes staring back at her, until something moved - rustled - behind her, and she snapped out of a trance.

That was great! I think that I can officially accept you into the community of Rising Dawn!

However, I cannot accept you as the Clan's deputy due to the fact that you have to officially audition for the position on the site (after officially joining the roleplay). So, you'll have to join as a regular warrior for now, but you never know! c:

Please, register onto the site (http://risingdawn.boards.net/), and I'll approve your account as soon as I get to it. Then add 'SCW' into your character's name, and send a joining request to the newly created in-game group 'Rising Dawn'! See you in the roleplay! c:

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[[This looks really cool!

1. FeralHeart Username: Outlander369.


2. Character Name: Redfeather || Cherryspeck.


3. Desired Clan: StormClan || CreekClan.


4. Desired Position: Medicine Cat for StormClan || Deputy for CreekClan.


5. Something about your character (personality, picture, backstory, and such)
Redfeather:
Quote: "If the entire Clan could consist of medicine cats, we'd all be in danger. Stop being a little fox dung and accept that you're not special!"

Name: Redfeather.
Gender: Tom.
Clan: StormClan.
Age: 37 moons.
Status: Medicine Cat.

Eye color: Ice blue.
Pelt color: Dark ginger.
Markings: Darker tabby stripes.
Scars: None.
Body type: Large, solid, sleek-furred.
Other appearance traits: White paws and chest.
Personality: Sarcastic, snappy, cold, honest, unsympathetic, passive, stubborn, independent.

Likes: His own space.
Dislikes: Most things, conflict, kits, annoying, immature cats, battle-hungry mousebrains, Gatherings, Gingerstripe.

Parents: Hazelpelt x Gingerstripe. [Before Ginger was meddie]
Siblings: Redthorn, Mistpelt, Ravenflight.
Mate: N/A. [Not Open]
Kits: N/A. [Not Open]

Mentor: Gingerstripe.
Apprentice: Obtained a former apprentice, who wasn't meant to be.

Friends: ~~
Enemies: Gingerstripe.

Best skill: Medicine + Herbs.
Other skills: Overthinking the negativity in one scenario.
Powers (if any): Refer to above.
Weaknesses: He has mega daddy issues, because he was neglected by his father at a young age. Prey for him.

Leadership (out of ten): Eight.
Agility (out of ten): Seven.
Stamina (out of ten): Seven.
Speed (out of ten): Seven.
Stealth (out of ten): Six.
Strength (out of ten): Five.
Defense (out of ten): Nine.

Fighting style: Like an StormClan cat?

Other features (blind, deaf, ect.): Daddy Issues.?





Cherryspeck:
Quote: "I'm just saying, if you cherish that pelt of yours, stay on the CreekClan border."

Name: Cherryspeck.
Gender: She-cat.
Clan: CreekClan.
Age: 47 moons.
Status: Deputy.

Eye color: Amber.
Pelt color: Dark and dark ginger.
Markings: Tortoiseshell.
Scars: None.
Body type: Large, sleek-furred.
Other appearance traits: White paws.
Personality: Fair, savvy, patient, honest, skeptical, reserved.

Likes: Unity.
Dislikes: Conflict, arguments, Clan battles.

Parents: Ripplesong x Mallardfeather
Siblings: [Open]
Mate: [Open]
Kits: [Not Open]

Mentor: Previous warrior. [Open]
Apprentice: Previous apprentice. [Open]

Friends: ~~
Enemies: ~~

Best skill: Swimming.
Other skills: Perspective.
Powers (if any): N/A.
Weaknesses: Unknown.

Leadership (out of ten): Nine.
Agility (out of ten): Five.
Stamina (out of ten): Five.
Speed (out of ten): Six.
Stealth (out of ten): Six.
Strength (out of ten): Seven.
Defense (out of ten): Seven.

Fighting style: Water based moves

Other features (blind, deaf, ect.): N/A.




6. RP Sample:
The dark tabby tom slipped underneath the barrier to camp, feeling the thorn tips scrap against his lovely, sleek fur. Camp seemed to be more active as usual, he grimaced, gazing around the clearing. From the entrance, he could make out the sturdy frame of his leader climbing out from behind the crack in the rock, where his den was. From the other side of the clearing, the newly arrived kits were seen battling at one another and prancing to the other side of the den. Redfeather noticed the kit's tiny, swollen paw,  a bothered expression sinking into his features as he realised that his work to mend the kit back to health was a waste. The leader must have forgotten to tell the apprentices to replace the bramble roof of the nursery. With a ripple of irritation, he made his way over to the kits, speaking once he was within earshot, "It'll do your paw no good if you're going to encourage it to reopen. You were edging towards infection the first time, do you really want to risk it now?"

(lookout for grammar, try to be descriptive, and do not use wolfspeak. We are capable of accepting semi-literate people, if they are willing to improve though!)

Greetings!

First of all, your audition was great! So I think that I can welcome you as the new member of Rising Dawn! However, you can only join with one character that does not bear any high positions, so you can ideally join as a warrior. High ranks are still open to audition on the official site, but you need to officially join the roleplay before auditioning.

Also, deputy of CreekClan has been already claimed by Snowscar (jammer80245), but a medicine cat for StormClan is still open! c:



I was not planning on playing both! I wanted to know which one you needed more! I shall join as Cherryspeck for now.

Oh, right!

As I mentioned, CreekClan already has a deputy, so Cherryspeck would be probably required to stay as a warrior. However, the medicine cat position in StormClan is open, meaning that the other character, Redfeather, can earn the wanted position! Just audition and who knows? Maybe he is going to become StormClan's healer in the end C:

That's up to you though! c:

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[[This looks really cool!

1. FeralHeart Username: Outlander369.


2. Character Name: Redfeather || Cherryspeck.


3. Desired Clan: StormClan || CreekClan.


4. Desired Position: Medicine Cat for StormClan || Deputy for CreekClan.


5. Something about your character (personality, picture, backstory, and such)
Redfeather:
Quote: "If the entire Clan could consist of medicine cats, we'd all be in danger. Stop being a little fox dung and accept that you're not special!"

Name: Redfeather.
Gender: Tom.
Clan: StormClan.
Age: 37 moons.
Status: Medicine Cat.

Eye color: Ice blue.
Pelt color: Dark ginger.
Markings: Darker tabby stripes.
Scars: None.
Body type: Large, solid, sleek-furred.
Other appearance traits: White paws and chest.
Personality: Sarcastic, snappy, cold, honest, unsympathetic, passive, stubborn, independent.

Likes: His own space.
Dislikes: Most things, conflict, kits, annoying, immature cats, battle-hungry mousebrains, Gatherings, Gingerstripe.

Parents: Hazelpelt x Gingerstripe. [Before Ginger was meddie]
Siblings: Redthorn, Mistpelt, Ravenflight.
Mate: N/A. [Not Open]
Kits: N/A. [Not Open]

Mentor: Gingerstripe.
Apprentice: Obtained a former apprentice, who wasn't meant to be.

Friends: ~~
Enemies: Gingerstripe.

Best skill: Medicine + Herbs.
Other skills: Overthinking the negativity in one scenario.
Powers (if any): Refer to above.
Weaknesses: He has mega daddy issues, because he was neglected by his father at a young age. Prey for him.

Leadership (out of ten): Eight.
Agility (out of ten): Seven.
Stamina (out of ten): Seven.
Speed (out of ten): Seven.
Stealth (out of ten): Six.
Strength (out of ten): Five.
Defense (out of ten): Nine.

Fighting style: Like an StormClan cat?

Other features (blind, deaf, ect.): Daddy Issues.?





Cherryspeck:
Quote: "I'm just saying, if you cherish that pelt of yours, stay on the CreekClan border."

Name: Cherryspeck.
Gender: She-cat.
Clan: CreekClan.
Age: 47 moons.
Status: Deputy.

Eye color: Amber.
Pelt color: Dark and dark ginger.
Markings: Tortoiseshell.
Scars: None.
Body type: Large, sleek-furred.
Other appearance traits: White paws.
Personality: Fair, savvy, patient, honest, skeptical, reserved.

Likes: Unity.
Dislikes: Conflict, arguments, Clan battles.

Parents: Ripplesong x Mallardfeather
Siblings: [Open]
Mate: [Open]
Kits: [Not Open]

Mentor: Previous warrior. [Open]
Apprentice: Previous apprentice. [Open]

Friends: ~~
Enemies: ~~

Best skill: Swimming.
Other skills: Perspective.
Powers (if any): N/A.
Weaknesses: Unknown.

Leadership (out of ten): Nine.
Agility (out of ten): Five.
Stamina (out of ten): Five.
Speed (out of ten): Six.
Stealth (out of ten): Six.
Strength (out of ten): Seven.
Defense (out of ten): Seven.

Fighting style: Water based moves

Other features (blind, deaf, ect.): N/A.




6. RP Sample:
The dark tabby tom slipped underneath the barrier to camp, feeling the thorn tips scrap against his lovely, sleek fur. Camp seemed to be more active as usual, he grimaced, gazing around the clearing. From the entrance, he could make out the sturdy frame of his leader climbing out from behind the crack in the rock, where his den was. From the other side of the clearing, the newly arrived kits were seen battling at one another and prancing to the other side of the den. Redfeather noticed the kit's tiny, swollen paw,  a bothered expression sinking into his features as he realised that his work to mend the kit back to health was a waste. The leader must have forgotten to tell the apprentices to replace the bramble roof of the nursery. With a ripple of irritation, he made his way over to the kits, speaking once he was within earshot, "It'll do your paw no good if you're going to encourage it to reopen. You were edging towards infection the first time, do you really want to risk it now?"

(lookout for grammar, try to be descriptive, and do not use wolfspeak. We are capable of accepting semi-literate people, if they are willing to improve though!)

Greetings!

First of all, your audition was great! So I think that I can welcome you as the new member of Rising Dawn! However, you can only join with one character that does not bear any high positions, so you can ideally join as a warrior. High ranks are still open to audition on the official site, but you need to officially join the roleplay before auditioning.

Also, deputy of CreekClan has been already claimed by Snowscar (jammer80245), but a medicine cat for StormClan is still open! c:

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