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Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« on: January 16, 2016, 11:09:39 pm »


Name: Lunarfang/Calia (she prefers Calia)

Gender: Female

Species: Wolf

Mate: None/Open

Pups: Angel (In another pack)

Personality: Calia has a sharp tongue and is not afraid to insult anyone if they offend her in any way. She may seem like a snappy, obnoxious wolf on the outside but once you get on her good side she can be a good friend to have. She is very protective of those she cares about, but she is wary of male wolves. This may seem silly but she has her reasons. Her very first litter was with a wolf named Oak. He was a sweet and understanding wolf and made her feel wanted. But when their pup Angel was born, he died. After that Calia wouldn't speak or eat for a few days until she realised that she still had Angel and she needed to take care of her only daughter. One day Angel wandered away and was captured by another pack. Calia begged for her daughter and eventually made a deal with the alpha of the pack that if she won a fight with him she could have her daughter back. Calia fought with everything she had but she wasn't strong enough to bring down the alpha. She was forced from the territory as the wolves laughed at her, she could only hope that the pack would be good to her daughter.

Despite everything that had happened Calia took on another mate. This wolf was named Flare, he was an amber colored wolf with yellow eyes; when the sunlight shone on his fur it looked as if small flames were dancing on his pelt. He would tell Calia how lucky he was to have her with him. He was always by her side and she thought of him as her mate and her friend. But everything changed when she announced that she was carrying his pups. He began to avoid her and pretended that she didn't exist. One night he told her that he had found someone new. Right then he walked away leaving Calia with a broken heart yet again. Calia never forgave Flare for what he did and she became bitter towards all male wolves after that.

Mother: Moondancer (deceased)

Father: DeepDark (Leader of his own pack)

Sister: Starshine (In her father's pack)


(Is there anything I should change about her? I would love some suggestions :3)

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Re: Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2016, 11:32:03 pm »
No, I don't see anything wrong here; your character is lovely. She sounds like an interesting character.

The colors fits quite lovely.

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Re: Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2016, 11:37:18 pm »
Thank you!

She was my second wolf I ever made (I deleted my first oops :P) so she is very special to me.

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Re: Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« Reply #3 on: January 17, 2016, 06:22:05 am »
As Preach said above, there is nothing wrong about your character, luff<3 She's pretty!
Farewell everyone<3

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Re: Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« Reply #4 on: January 17, 2016, 09:33:12 am »
Don't worry about changing your character my dear, honestly it's your decisions and not the communities. The decisions you make to do with her should be your choice alone, don't let other people control what isn't theirs. <3

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Re: Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« Reply #5 on: January 17, 2016, 02:10:01 pm »
Thank you everyone!

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Re: Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« Reply #6 on: January 17, 2016, 02:20:30 pm »
She is lovely dearie! I don't see anything wrong with her.
Nice job. c:

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Re: Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« Reply #7 on: January 17, 2016, 09:49:13 pm »
Thanks!

I hope one day she can get another mate. She deserves it after what's happened.

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Re: Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« Reply #8 on: January 18, 2016, 05:02:23 pm »
She's very well thought out, I love it! Her design is purdy as well, nice job on her.
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Re: Calia Leader of The Falling Stars Pack
« Reply #9 on: January 18, 2016, 05:20:15 pm »
Why thank you! I'm really happy that you guys like her :)