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FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: Enoki on January 11, 2016, 03:35:17 am

Title: Novel Needs Some Critics
Post by: Enoki on January 11, 2016, 03:35:17 am
So I finally put m'booty into motion and published what I 'ave so far in m'Adventures in Yugure to Wattpad! As ye can see, I 'ave put it as m'signature to pass the news 'round. What I'd love is if ye all could give me a few views and reads to help make m'story popular! The more popular it gets, the better chance I 'ave at getting it published. 'Twould be most appreciated if ye'd stop on by m'profile and check out Eno's adventurous tale.

I'll be updating it frequently, adding each new chapter as 'tis finished. Feel free to give it a comment or "vote" (although I'm not really sure what that means, I think 'tis like giving it a thumbs up). Critiquing is most welcomed! Post any critiques below in this thread.

Thankies f'er reading, and I hope ye enjoy. ;3

(http://i1255.photobucket.com/albums/hh623/RosieTheFox/Journal%20Cover_zpstxrdyhzy.jpg) (https://www.wattpad.com/story/59633748)
Title: Re: Wattpad Account
Post by: G4RG0YLE on January 11, 2016, 07:25:45 am
Ermahgawwwwwd.
Not only is that cover looking fabulous, but so is the adventure. I couldn't take my eyes off of it fro 4 AM onwards. ;o;
Keep up the good work!
Title: Re: Wattpad Account
Post by: Preach on January 11, 2016, 10:07:37 am
The cover looks awesome. I can already tell this adventure is going to be awesome. Good luck. ^^
Title: Re: Wattpad Account
Post by: WolfScorcher9 on January 11, 2016, 10:27:33 am
All the best hopes for your writing!
Title: Re: Wattpad Account
Post by: Enoki on January 11, 2016, 05:22:15 pm
Ahhhhhh! Thankies everyone so very much! It means a lot to me to hear y'er feedback.

Quote from: Shurtle on January 11, 2016, 07:25:45 am
Ermahgawwwwwd.
Not only is that cover looking fabulous, but so is the adventure. I couldn't take my eyes off of it fro 4 AM onwards. ;o;
Keep up the good work!

Lol!! I hope I didn't deprive ye of y'er sleep, but I'm very pleased ye enjoyed what I got so far.

Quote from: Preach on January 11, 2016, 10:07:37 am
The cover looks awesome. I can already tell this adventure is going to be awesome. Good luck. ^^

Why thank ye! I couldn't 'ave done it without m'best friend. That be their African hide journal that I used f'er a cover. XD

Quote from: Wolf Scorcher on January 11, 2016, 10:27:33 am
All the best hopes for your writing!

Thank ye so very much! 'Tis very sweet of ye. :)
Title: Re: Wattpad Account
Post by: Tessel. on January 14, 2016, 09:21:19 pm
  Oooo, I've been looking for new reading material. I just may have to read this. c;
Great job on the cover, by the way. It looks so cool. :0
Title: Re: Wattpad Account
Post by: Enoki on January 14, 2016, 09:28:26 pm
Quote from: Tessel on January 14, 2016, 09:21:19 pm
  Oooo, I've been looking for new reading material. I just may have to read this. c;
Great job on the cover, by the way. It looks so cool. :0
Why thank ye very much! I do hope ye like it.

Indeed! Thank ye. The cover is absolutely gorgeous, if I do say so m'self. I couldn't 'ave made it so pretty if t'weren't f'er m'good friend who let me use their journal as the picture.
Title: Re: Wattpad Account
Post by: Enoki on February 18, 2016, 05:38:09 am
Hey everyone, I'd be greatly honored if a few literary critics would take on m'story and give me some feedback on it. Positive, negative, it really doesn't matter as long as 'tis constructive criticism! So far there are sixteen chapters, which is a pretty hefty amount of pages to read, but 'twould be most appreciated. Thankies f'er reading this.