Novel Needs Some Critics

[Enoki]

So I finally put m'booty into motion and published what I 'ave so far in m'Adventures in Yugure to Wattpad! As ye can see, I 'ave put it as m'signature to pass the news 'round. What I'd love is if ye all could give me a few views and reads to help make m'story popular! The more popular it gets, the better chance I 'ave at getting it published. 'Twould be most appreciated if ye'd stop on by m'profile and check out Eno's adventurous tale.

I'll be updating it frequently, adding each new chapter as 'tis finished. Feel free to give it a comment or "vote" (although I'm not really sure what that means, I think 'tis like giving it a thumbs up). Critiquing is most welcomed! Post any critiques below in this thread.

Thankies f'er reading, and I hope ye enjoy. ;3

[G4RG0YLE]

Ermahgawwwwwd.
Not only is that cover looking fabulous, but so is the adventure. I couldn't take my eyes off of it fro 4 AM onwards. ;o;
Keep up the good work!

[Preach]

The cover looks awesome. I can already tell this adventure is going to be awesome. Good luck. ^^

[WolfScorcher9]

All the best hopes for your writing!

[Enoki]

Ahhhhhh! Thankies everyone so very much! It means a lot to me to hear y'er feedback.

Ermahgawwwwwd.
Not only is that cover looking fabulous, but so is the adventure. I couldn't take my eyes off of it fro 4 AM onwards. ;o;
Keep up the good work!

Lol!! I hope I didn't deprive ye of y'er sleep, but I'm very pleased ye enjoyed what I got so far.

The cover looks awesome. I can already tell this adventure is going to be awesome. Good luck. ^^

Why thank ye! I couldn't 'ave done it without m'best friend. That be their African hide journal that I used f'er a cover. XD

All the best hopes for your writing!

Thank ye so very much! 'Tis very sweet of ye. :)

[Tessel.]

Oooo, I've been looking for new reading material. I just may have to read this. c;
Great job on the cover, by the way. It looks so cool. :0

[Enoki]

Oooo, I've been looking for new reading material. I just may have to read this. c;
Great job on the cover, by the way. It looks so cool. :0

Why thank ye very much! I do hope ye like it.

Indeed! Thank ye. The cover is absolutely gorgeous, if I do say so m'self. I couldn't 'ave made it so pretty if t'weren't f'er m'good friend who let me use their journal as the picture.

[Enoki]

Hey everyone, I'd be greatly honored if a few literary critics would take on m'story and give me some feedback on it. Positive, negative, it really doesn't matter as long as 'tis constructive criticism! So far there are sixteen chapters, which is a pretty hefty amount of pages to read, but 'twould be most appreciated. Thankies f'er reading this.