Feral Heart

Name: Feather
Photo/Appearance: A dark grey wolf with black markings and blue eyes.
Username: NaomiStar
Gender: Female
Age: 22 (Human years.)
Desired Rank: Hunter
Mate: None
Family: Unknown
Personality: She's mostly quiet, and isn't easily angered.It's slightly hard to earn her trust, but once you do, she is kind and loyal.
History: As a pup, she was raised in a normal pack, but then forced out for disagreeing with a higher rank.Now, she wonders about, in search of a pack.
RP Sample: Feather mumbled and glanced about to make sure there were no idiotic loners or possibly packs to bother her.She swiftly walked along the river, nearly slipping five times, and thunder lightened the sky with a loud crash.Feather sighed and raised her nose to the air.She couldn't smell any animals in the distance, probably because of the rain.Feather sighed, lowering her noise, and continued walking in the rain, fur wet.

uh...wha?
How???

Once,there were 4 wolves:Zero,FireStar,Echo,and Victor.They each had there own power.Shadow,fire,water,and ice.This was a cause of an illness that had went in the forest they lived in.They also had wings.This was also a cause of the illness.There storys begin on a spring morning.Zero was a middle grey,Fire star was black,Echo was white,and victory was a mix of all these colors.They were all sisters and brothers,who all dis-liked the weather on the day they were born.One day while Zero was laying by the pond,she saw a pup stuck under a branch.She waited for a minute then went lift the branch."Umm....are you ok?"She asked.The pup nodded.It was actually ok,it only had a scratch on it's paw.She took it to her den.
~END OF CHAPTER ONE~
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Also teh only thing on meh computer is gimp and feralheart! D: D:

Oh yea this happens when i select tools (im try to make a map) or i try to play teh game.