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(( So, I had a sudden epiphany while reading the first post.
It says that Flameclan's territory is fire-stricken, but they are also great tunnelers. I'll give you a second to put that together....
mind explosion
So I hurried and went to create a Flameclan cat.


Name- Whisperstep
Age- 31 moons
Gender- Female
Breed- Lynx Point
Mix- Marbled Tabby
Appearance- Small body with large, wide paws. Fur is very light brown with marbled darkbrown. Her eyes are blue.
Personality- She is very shy, introverted, and will often keep to herself. She hates conflict, letting everyone around step all over her. She is, however, an extremely skilled tunneler, and her skills underground have also made her observant and alert above ground as well.
Rank- Warrior
Clan- Flameclan

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~Opalpaw~
The apprentice listened closely to her mentor's explanation, her expression slightly troubled. Turning against their own kin... That remined Opalpaw a bit of her mother (or at least the way she thought of her). Mostly, she was just appalled that a clan-blood cat would do such a thing. Opalpaw lied down in the safety of the medicine cat den, glad that she wouldn't have to venture out into the darkness tonight. She tucked her front paws underneath her chest and let herself drift off, lulled by the familiar scent of herbs and the silent night.


=Foxtrap=
Foxtrap, upon hearing Liontuft's remark, shot Thornpaw a sort of knowing look. After burying his mouse, he disappared behind the warehouse to look for more. After retrieving no less than five mice, he returned to the front and dropped them by the others. The orange tom was huffing and puffing furiously, though he looked rather satisified with the amount of mice he had caught. There was just so many, he had started to get dizzy chasing them around.

Eventually a figure, easily seen in the darkness because of it's light pelt, emerged from behind the grungy door. Foxtrap didn't feel it was his place to praise the apprentice, but he looked impressed enough for Thornpaw to know by looking at his face. The siamese would be a good addition to the warriors of Valleyclan.
"It's already dark," He said, "We'll head back once Liontuft comes back."


*Oddstar*
The clan was starting to settle down, but Oddstar, still anxious from the debacle with rogues earlier, decided to stay up the night to watch vigilantly over her clan. She often did this, and over the smallest of things because she was slightly paranoid. But the leader couldn't ignore the heavy feeling in her chest that told her something bad was to happen.

A screech, a yowl bellowed from deep within the forest, travelled with the breeze and up into Oddstar's perked ears. Her bi-colored eyes were instantly open, her muscles tensing as she listened for anything else that might give away the invader's location. Nothing, and yet she took off into the branches. Staying within the canopy of branches, Oddstar travelled above the ground, hoping to catch the scent of the intruder.

The cat she found did not have the scen't of a clan cat, though. Faintly Rainclan, but not nearly enough to say for sure. The tom was flaming orange, with a nasty scar scaling his shoulder to his side. Oddstar thought he looked familiar, like he'd seen him at a Gathering once... Perched safely ontop of a high tree branch, she called out in a firm, serious tone, "Scavenging for trouble, are we?"

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=Foxtrap=
The orange tom turned his head slightly, after having noticed Thornpaw's accurate observation, eyeing Liontuft with an amused glint in his eye, "You've taught him well." He said in a low voice, as though if Thornpaw heard (which he probably did) it wouldn't be a good thing.  Foxtrap cleared his throat and raised his head to see the rusted old shed, his small pawsteps growing more cautious as he neared the place. Even if all three toms knew by now that the place was empty, there was just something eerie and sentient about the warehouse. Like something might pop out at you at any moment...

Foxtrap leaped onto a thick, fallen branch that was leaned up against the trunk of a tree. His claws unsheathed, splaying out over the wood, his eyes gleamed with a predatory look. They were focused on a certain patch of moonlight that shone through the trees and onto the ground. His tongue ran over his chops as he heard the patter of tiny feet. Foxtrap reacted with lightning precision as a silvery figure passed through the patch of light, revealed in the open for a fraction of a second. The next moment, the tom was holding the bloodied mouse by the tail.
"The night is alive with mice... I think now would be a good time to hunt like a kittypet on too much catmint," Foxtrap was sort of known for strange analogies. The dangerous, predatory look came over his eyes again, but this time it was directed at Thornpaw. "There's probably a bunch of them in that warehouse... If you care to go inside."


Opalpaw followed closely at Tornear's heel, hoping her slightly distressed expression would not show. Even with two warriors accompanying them, the white-furred apprentice was still a bit shaken from the condition of Rainkit earlier. Also, Opalpaw disliked travelling outside camp when it was dark. Why couldn't the journey wait until daybreak?

Upon hearing a slight rustling in the bushes, Opalpaw quickened her pace to walk beside her mentor. It was probably just the breeze, she told herself... She looked up, "Tornear...?" Her voice was low and quiet, trying not to disturb the natural silence of the night, "Where do rogues come from?"  

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Art Gallery / Re: Comandos Arty-Art-Art c;
« on: January 07, 2014, 03:17:19 pm »
N'aww, I love it, Comacon!~ Yeah, I was a little shaky for a while when I first got my tablet too. Trust me, the more you use it, the better you'll get at it. These requests will be good practice for ya. Thank you again <3

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~Opalpaw~
Opalpaw smiled down at the white kit, her voice holding an air of wonder, "Ah, yes... I thought only warriors did heroic things. How strange." The oblivious apprentice was being given a warning glare from Oddstar, as if the leader was saying to her niece 'Don't encourage her'. Their leader soon spoke these thoughts, her voice deep and authoritative as usual, "I must say that I appreciate your warning, young Rainkit, and it has saved the lives of two valuable warriors, but you nearly got yourself turned into crowfood out there," Opalpaw watched the odd-eyed she-cat stand and turn to leave. "I won't punish you this time, but know that I will not stand for it if it happens again." Oddstar drifted away, her pawsteps clearly displayed in the mud. The rain had been reduced to a chilly, moonlit gust.

Opalpaw turned toward Tornear, ears perked and eyes shining with expectance.  


((I noticed I wrote "Foxstar" on my last post. Woops xD Ignore that, if you noticed.))
=Foxtrap=
Foxtrap shaked his head, making his way out of the camp. "I'd love to bring her along, but... Oh well."
The three toms proceeded to patrol the territory, until Foxtrap found the trip to be a bit too quiet. "Should we, er... Check the warehouse?" The tom was always a bit reluctant to approach said warehouse, since it was rather mysterious and empty. When it wasn't empty, it was occupied with two-legs. The place was a bit nervewracking, to be honest. But it was something that had to be done every once in a while.



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((Waiting for Rainkit's post for Opalpaw.))

*Oddstar*
The thick-furred leader was too wrought with worry to notice her warriors snide comment, and was silently thoughtful the whole way back to camp. There had been rogue encounters before, of course, but four at once was definitely worrisome. Had they not been thorough enough in checking the boundaries? Oddstar made a note in her mind to make patrols a bit more frequent. The Gathering was but a few days away. She would have to discuss this with the other clans and see if they had similar problems...

Oddstar arrived in camp, the faint scent of blood causing the fur on the back of her neck to rise. Her eyes laid on Rainkit, who lay a few steps from the medicine cat den, tended to by Tornear and Opalpaw. Seeing a young kit hurt by this situation only furthered Oddstar's disgust toward rogues. Heartless creatures, they were, to attack a kit without remorse.  Oddstar sent the warriors unscathed by the rogue battle back into the forest to hunt, then made her way toward the medicine cat.
"You may want to pay Tornear a visit, if your wounds are worse enough," She said to Rumblecloud and Amberflash. Oddstar stood in front of the tortoiseshell, her expression concerned. "Is it fatal?" 


=Foxstar=
The orange tom sat back and huffed, smoothing down his chest fur with his tongue. "Apprentices these days," He chided the unconscious Applepaw. He then raised his eyes to look behind Liontuft, spotting a certain ginger-tinted siamese. "Oh well, no reason to stall. Applepaw will just have to learn the consequences of sleeping in--" Foxtrap's nose twitched, "Did you leave without me? Find anything?" The small tom was already padding eagerly out of the den, as if the presence of an intruder was a fascinating sight to see. "Liontuft, what did you find?" He asked again, then looked down at Thornpaw, "If you're lucky, kid, you might see you're first rogue encounter. Could be fun."

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(( I love how you jazzed up the main post~))

=Foxtrap=
Foxtrap was greatly pleased to see Liontuft mildly irritated at the manner he had been woken up. He didn't know what it was about Liontuft that made teasing him so amusing. The orange tom wa usually pleasant and friendly around his other clanmates.
 "Now where would the fun in that be?" He purred, padding smoothly away towards the apprentice's den to wake Applepaw for the patrol, leaving Liontuft to alert Meadowstar. Foxtrap poked his head into the den, green eyes searching for the lump of fur that would be his apprentice. "Applepaw." He started, his voice taking on a serious tone as he found where she was sleeping, "You don't want to take after Liontuft in sleeping in, don't you?" Foxtrap nudged her gently with a paw, "We're going on a patrol. I think it's about time I take you farther outside into the boundaries."



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Art Gallery / Re: Quickly, I shall sketch your OCs! [Closed--For now!]
« on: January 03, 2014, 11:38:18 pm »
You're welcome Twee~ You're character's design is really pretty, so I had fun drawing her.

For Zena:


I'm going to take a short break, but I'll post again to update you stalkers out there when requests are open again~

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((@Demonic, you might wanna mention whether she's loner/rogue/kittypet C: ))

~Opalpaw~
The odd-eyed apprentice's maw parted, about to share with Tornear just what kind of mess she was in, but was interrupted a shrill yowl. It did not sound like a warrior's yowl, though, more like a sharp, high-pitched echo of one. Opalpaw followed the noise with her eyes, her ears smoothed back against her head. She saw little Rainkit with a bloodied front leg and was immediately on her paws before Tornear could bark an order at her. The lithe she-cat quickly slipped into the den, mud trailing after her white body. Her ear flicked as she listened to her mentor's orders, brows furrowed in concentration. First, she snatched up a mouthful of cobwebs, stretching the subtsance from it's place until it snapped off. Opalpaw dragged it out and dropped it by Tornear's paws, zipping away back into the den with fragments of the stuff still clinging to her maw.

She got to work mixing the herbs Tornear had laid out, oakleaf, marigold, chervil, and goldenrod chewed together to create a bitter, conflicting concoction. It made Opalpaw want to hiss and hack, but she held through and scooped the mixture onto a slab of willow bark after seeing that there weren't any beech leaves left. She carried it out to them and laid the wood down, sitting back to left Tornear to the rest. Opalpaw curled her tail around her paws, her expression worried. "Little bird should not have left the nest so early," She crooned softly, "Little bird fell and broke her wing."  

((Opalpaw you're not supposed to metaphor))

*Oddstar*
The leader and her hunting group were not far from the camp when Rainkit rushed back, and so the thick-furred she-cat could with her sensitive ears that something was definitely not right. "Starclan's kits," She hissed under her breath. Oddstar bounded forward, following the scent of the two names the kit had cried. "Follow me! Our fellows warriors are in danger!" She growled to the patrol she had with her.

It wasn't long before they reached the grounds of the skirmish, and the questions rushing through Oddstar's head were answered. Rogues. She thought with disgust, her anger flaring even more at the condition of Rumblecloud and Amberflash. The leader spared no time sending the three warriors she had with her into battle, charging in herself when the four rogues were overwhelmed. Oddstar unsheathed her claws and slashed at the nearest rogue, who jumped away with a massive cut on their cheek. The battle didn't last more than a few more minutes, as the rogues stamina and morale waned, realizing that they were now the ones outnumbered. Oddstar left one rogue with a chink in their ear and another with a bite mark scaling their flank.
She yowled after them, "Return and we'll make one big pile of mousedust with you!" Oddstar blinked and breathed in, composing herself as she turned back to the warriors. "Rumblecloud, Amberflash, are you fit to walk? What happened?"


Foxtrap weaved his way silently through various furry bodies, making his way through the warrior's den without so much as a peep. The orange tom stopped upon seeing Liontuft and stepped onto the male, only with his two front paws on the warriors side. Most Valleyclan cats were rather small, and even Foxtrap, a tom in his prime was fairly light, so having one standing on top of you wouldn't be that bad. Still, to a sleeping warrior it probably wasn't a very pleasant feeling to wake up to.
"Liooontuuuuft," Foxtrap purred, flexing his claws over the tom's fur, grazing the skin just enough to be annoying but not enough to actually harm. "Around that time. To, y'know. Patrol stuff. Im supposed to be taking my apprentice along too. So. You should come with us, yeah? Liooontuuuft?"  

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Art Gallery / Re: Quickly, I shall sketch your OCs! [Closed--For now!]
« on: December 31, 2013, 10:57:45 pm »
Glad you like it Alpha~

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