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In-Game Roleplay & Group Advertisement / Re: Rising Dawn || Literate Warriors RP
« on: August 08, 2016, 03:05:29 pm »1. FeralHeart Username: toxicwolf9876
2. Character Name: SnowHeart
3. Desired Clan: Mistclan
4. Desired Position: Warrior
5. Something about your character (personality, picture, backstory, and such): Snowheart since she was born was a really shy kitten and she couldn't defend herself since she was weak and didn't knew how to hunt and attack, she also was a loner since her parents died when she was born. When she was an apprentice she met Adderstar, the leader of mistclan, Adderstar teached her how to hunt and protect herself from other wild cats, she was a really brave warrior and she kinda would be mean & friendly to others, she didn't made alot of friends when she was an apprentice and she was often bullied by other cats in the clan.
6. RP Sample:
Snowheart would watch from the top of the mountain alone with the wind blowing around her, she wished she was like ones of these cats who haves alot of friends and were brave warriors. She said whispering to herself "I wish i could be liked like others do." as she slowly shed a tear, She came back to her clan walking around slowly with her ears in the back afraid. Night was falling and she had to hunt & other missions, she ran faster than other cat would to do it fast before a wild cat appears and attacks her, when she was going back to her clan walking she heard a loud noise in the forest. She refused to check, when she saw the leader wasn't there and alot of cats were afraid & scared about what happened to Adderstar, she was the only one who had to check around the forest, she slowly walked afraid and terrified trying to find her, the wind was blowing so hard but she still had to find her, she wouldn't give up. She got shocked when she saw cats were attacking here, she couldn't do anything but watch as she was terrified, she shed a tear slowly falling in the ground, she told herself to go there but she declined it alot of times but she did it, the claws of her paws attacked the wild cats strong, she left the cats bleeding in the ground. As the day was coming she was excited for her new name, the bravest warrior in the clan.
(sorry for my english it's not my first lenguage)
Eye Color: Blue
Fur color: White & grey
Markings: Scars around her legs or body
Ears color: grey
Tail tip: grey
Afraid of: shadows, wild strong cats
Appearence:
(Credit for original artist)
Gender: She-cat (female)
Age: 17 moons (16 years old)
Siblings: (doesn't haves yet)
Parents: Coldheart x thunderstar
Brothers: (doesn't haves yet)
Friends: ~~
enemies: ~~
Dislikes: annoying people & animals,kits,mosquitoes
Best skills: Hunting & climbing
Fighting style: Wind moves
(also i made an account and it's pending i think)
hope i get accepted!
Accepted ^^
Though I have some notes to your overall auditions; your character's father cannot be someone named Thunderstar, who is likely a leader of one of the Clans. This cannot be approved, as some lines of leaders have been already created and are considered canon to the Rising Dawn universe. There's no cat named Thunderstar, and it would require some permission to have a character related to one of those. Also, what are "wind moves?" The roleplay is realistic, and cats can only use some realistic attacks, not elemental powers or something. Though I believe that we can solve these details in the regular group chat.
I approved your site account. So you can go there and read everything important. Add MCW into the character's name and send a joining request to Rising Dawn. I'll approve it as soon as I get to the recruiter.
See you in-game! ^^