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Stories / Wolf Eyes Chapter 3: BlackStar's Power is Revealed
« on: July 05, 2011, 09:34:41 pm »
BlackStar liked this new pack of hers. She had a lot of friends and her best friend was Mitira, a goldend pelt, emerald eyed female pup with white for her underfur, paws, and tailtip. She is the same age as BlackStar and there are unseperatable as if they were sisters. BlackStar was taught many things from her teacher Kriko. He would teach her how to hunt, fight, how to take care of pups when she gets older, and how to lead a pack like their alphas Galahon and Fraya. Now she is a beautiful 2 year old wolf with a lot of wisdom, but during her years living with this new pack of hers, she has been having dreams that feel real, but their not nightmares or ordinary dreams. In her dreams, she keeps seeing a pure black male wolf with blood red eyes and the only thing he keeps saying to her is 'You killed them. You are the cursed one. You are a murderer who only seeks bloodshed.' and she keeps saying 'Who did I kill? No I'm not cursed! Please explain to me what is going on? No I'm not a murderer!' then she would just wake up in the middle of the night sweating.

Now the alphas have a new litter of pups and they appointed BlackStar to be their Elite Guard for the pups along with the pups that BlackStar used to play with when she was a pup. But one wolf in the pack, who was the alphas first and only pup, didn't like BlackStar the moment she came into the pack. Her name is Saskiri, she has pure black for her pelt and light blue for her husky-like markings, tailtip, above and below eyelids, and her eyes. She also has a small group of followers to help her over throw BlackStar and her newborn siblings. Most of the pack went off for the Great Hunt, which comes only once a year in the spring, but the ones who stayed back at the den were BlackStar and the other Elite Guards to watch the pups, and Saskiri and her small band of followers. When the pack returned with a lot of food, one of the pack members went off to retrive BlackStar and the Elite Guards to join the feast. BlackStar said that she wanted to stay to watch the pups while the others went to the feast. Thats when Saskiri and her band of followers came out of the shadows. "BlackStar i knew you would stay." Saskiri said. "Well I must watch your siblings while the pack is at the feast. The alphas would want me to." said BlackStar.
"Of course they would. Or would they?"
"What are you talking about Saskiri?"
"Well if you haven't heard, my parents said that before they pass, they want you to be the alpha of the pack."
BlackStar was confused. She didn't understand why Galahon and Fraya want her to be the alpha once they passed.

 "The alphas are already discussing this matter already?" Saskiri smirked. "Yes. Remarkable isn't it? And whats MORE remarkable is that they would choose you as the new alpha instead of their own DAUGHTER! They say that I don't have the makings of a leader, but there wrong. I'm supposed to be the next alpha! I'm supposed to be the strongest! Plus I have followers. I have promised them positions of power when I become alpha. Kill her." Her followers attack BlackStar, but she had to protect them like the pups. When she was done tiring out all of Saskiri's followers, she heard Saskiri laughing in the pups den. Without hesitation, BlackStar ran into the pup den and saw Saskiri with the pups. "GET OUT OF THERE! YOU CAN'T BE IN HERE!" she growled. "And why not? They are my kin after all. So I won't hurt them... MUCH!" and she was about to kill the pups. BlackStar felt a power that was about to come out. She heard the male's voice again. 'You are the cursed one.' it kept saying that over and over again. Then BlackStar glowed a pure white light and her pelt became pure white, her eyes still the same blue color but  they glowed, and she had bright golden markings on her and attacked Saskiri. During the battle, Saskiri had never fought anyone like this before, but she tried to take down BlackStar, but then grew weak.

After when Saskiri grew weak, BlackStar went back to her original state with amazment and shock at her power that she never knew. But then she saw the pups lifeless bodies, but they didn't have any scars or nothing, but they were dead. Unfortunetly, her power had abosrbed the weakest life forms that was in the den and had also made Saskiri weak. "No. NO!" she screamed and curled up around there lifeless bodies and cried. Saskiri escaped the den and went to her parents. BlackStar cried herself to sleep and then later woke up with wolves growling at her. They dragged her out and found the pups lifeless bodies. The alphas were angry at BlackStar and they banished her out of the pack and the pack's territory along with her Elite Guards. BlackStar was upset because of what happened to her. She didn't understand why her power had to kill the pups. Her and the Elite Guards where banished to the OutLands never to be seen again... or were they?

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Stories / Wolf Eyes Chatper 2: BlackStar's Second Chance
« on: June 29, 2011, 03:43:50 am »
Both BlackStar and Kriko walked through the quiet snow that still fell on top of them. "Were almost there pup." Kriko said to BlackStar who was closely following Kriko. The pup had many questions in her mind like could she trust Kriko, will his pack let her in, but the question that kept popping in her head was, where was her mother? Having being lost in her thoughts, she tripped on a rock in the snow. Kriko looked behind him to find BlackStar lying face down in the snow. He walked over to her and said, "Are you ok BlackStar?"
"Yeah. I'm ok. I just kinda spaced out." she said getting up and shaking the fur off her pelt.
Kriko smiled slightly at the pup and thought, "The alphas will love this pup. I just know it." Then they both started to walk again.

 After about 30 minutes of walking, Kriko stopped and said, "Here we are pup. This the Fortress of the Whiteblood Wolves." he said pointing to a huge stone-like fortress. BlackStar stared in amazement and thought in her head that there was no way that wolves could have built this. They started toward the gates of the fortress where two guards were standing in front of. "Ahh, welcome back Kriko. I see you found a pup." said one of the guards cheerfully. Then he looked up and said loudly to the wolf on the top of the fortress, "Open the gates!" and the gates slowly opened like double-doors. Kriko and BlackStar walked inside and it was warm. Then the gates closed behind them. Inside there were a lot of wolves with many shades of colors and markings. In the middle of the fortress, was a huge fire that kept the entire fortress warm. Even the guards could feel the warmth coming from inside if they just touched it. The wolves inside were talking, until Kriko lead BlackStar inside. The wolves stopped and stared at the pup with smiling faces. Kriko and BlackStar walked up to a big rock with two wolves sitting on it. The male was a big dark grey 4 year old with ice blue eyes and a black tail tip and an "X" shaped scar on his face. He also had a lighter grey for his underfur. To the female who was sitting next to him, was a beautiful light blue 4 year old with emerald green eyes and a darker blue for her underfur, also with her upper eyelids. "Alphas Galahon and Fraya," Kriko said bowing down to them. BlackStar hid behind Kriko. "I have returned from my patrol and I have found a pup in our territory." BlackStar knew he was talking about her, so she stepped out behind him and stood next to him. "Is this the pup you found Kriko?" said Fraya happily with her tail slightly wagging. Kriko looked at BlackStar and said, "Yes. This is her. Her name is BlackStar." he said smiling. "Umm... Hello." BlackStar said shyly and she bowed down to the alphas as well. Galahon chuckled and said, "It's alright there little one. We won't hurt you, so do not fear." he said in a calming tone.

BlackStar raised her head slowly and saw that the alphas were smiling softly at her and she smilied back to them with her tail wagging. Then Fraya looked over to a wolf and said, "Shinzuna," Shinzuna was a good natured 3 year old pure black female wolf with violet eyes and a light blue color for her upper eyelids. She trotted over to the big rock and said, "Yes alpha Fraya?" "Take this pup to the bathing area and give her a good meal. From now on you will be looking after her." Shinzuna smilied cheerfully and said, "Of course alpha Fraya. Come with me pup." BlackStar was happy that she was accepted into this new pack of hers. She followed Shinzuna, and when she passes Kriko, BlackStar said, "Thank you." and followed Shinuzuna.

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Stories / Re: Wolf Eyes Chapter 1: BlackStar
« on: June 29, 2011, 02:53:42 am »
aww thx!! idk you'll just have to see Chapter 2!! O_O lol XD

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Aww nice story! Sano, Lelanie, and Aaron sound like cute little lion cubs! Though it is a shame that they were all abandonned like that D= i hope they find a pride soon... P.S. can't wait for Chapter 3 ^^

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Stories / Wolf Eyes Chapter 1: BlackStar
« on: June 26, 2011, 11:04:04 pm »
As the pure white snow fell from the moonlit sky, a small female pure black pup with yellow around her eyes and on her tailtip, was lying on the ground with snow covering her body. She was asleep in this empty huge field with snow as far as the eye can see. She slowly opened her eyes and found herself in the middle of nowhere. She quickly perked up her head and looked all around with a complete look of shock on her face. "Huh? Where am I? Mommy? Mommy!?" she said in a very scared and worried voice. She stood up and shook off the snow from her jet black pelt. She looked around some more, but the only thing she found was just snow and the bright moon shining on her. The pup folded her ears back in sadness and sat down. "Mommy!" she cried. She kept calling out for her mother, but nothing happened.

She lowered her head down and stared at the snow the was covering her paws and cried. She thought where was her mother, her pack, where she was, and how she got there. Then she curled up in the snow and cried very hard. Not far away from her, a lone pure white male wolf with a scar on his side in the shape of a fang, was coming in the direction of the pup. "Huh? Whats that sound?" as he said with his ears perked in the direction of the pup. He followed the sound of crying that lead him to the pup. "Aww poor pup. She must be lost." he thought. "Hey pup," he said looking at the black pup. "Who are you and are you lost?" The pup looked up and saw the white male's face with her cute sky blue eyes. "Umm, I'm BlackStar and I think I'm lost. I don't know where my mommy is." The male felt sad for BlackStar and said, "I'm Kriko." he said in a calming voice.

"Look BlackStar, you shouldn't be out here all alone. There's no food for miles and there might be predators around. Here, why don't come with me. My alphas had told me to scout the territory which your in."
"Oh, sorry I didn't know and really? Do you think they'll let me in?" BlackStar said with a bit of excitment.
"Of course. I don't think they'll turn down a little pup like you. Here follow me." Kirko said as BlackStar followed.

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