Feral Heart

Ok lets try this again.

Black wandered the forest, starving as usual, when she spoted a young cub. She saw it as prey and pounced. It yelped once in pain before it was torn to bits by the starving older canine. When she finished her meal she quickly left for she heard hurried footsteps coming.


Better? I hope?

aww I forgot the roleplay exampl! ok here we go

Black wandered the forest, starving as usual, when she spots a young cub. She sees it as prey and pounces. It yelped once in pain before being torn to bits by the starving older canine. When she finishes her meal she quickly leaves for she heard hurried footsteps coming.

thanks. I plan on making more but gimp AND FH REFUSE to work.