Rise of the Element Wolves

[NaomiStar]

Once,there were 4 wolves:Zero,FireStar,Echo,and Victor.They each had there own power.Shadow,fire,water,and ice.This was a cause of an illness that had went in the forest they lived in.They also had wings.This was also a cause of the illness.There storys begin on a spring morning.Zero was a middle grey,Fire star was black,Echo was white,and victory was a mix of all these colors.They were all sisters and brothers,who all dis-liked the weather on the day they were born.One day while Zero was laying by the pond,she saw a pup stuck under a branch.She waited for a minute then went lift the branch."Umm....are you ok?"She asked.The pup nodded.It was actually ok,it only had a scratch on it's paw.She took it to her den.
~END OF CHAPTER ONE~
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[NaomiStar]

Chapter two!
During the time,FireStar had ingeried his tail.An elk had stabbed it with it's antlers.He went to Echo.Echo was a medecine wolf in his old pack,so he could at least stop the bleeding.He sealed up the wound.Mean while where Zero was.......she had left teh pup in the forest.

(Ok thats all i got XD)
(Also please rate and i might make a rp of this)
(on the role play i WiLl TyPe LiKe ThIs)