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Offline Kastilla

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The Wolfie
« on: March 31, 2013, 02:49:01 pm »
Go away and ignore this.
It was pointless.
« Last Edit: June 21, 2013, 07:06:57 pm by Kastilla »
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Re: The Wolfie
« Reply #1 on: April 03, 2013, 09:47:49 am »
Characteristics:
Strength: 19.9/20
Stamina: 16/18
Speed: 23/25 (Including the sprint)
Intelligence: 40/40
Trickster...Ness: 30/30
Temperament: 50/40
Tolerance: 4/20
I'm not to sure if it's just me being picky... but that does seem to be god moding right there. I think I understand what your going for, however, might I suggest you write it out? For example instead of
Intelligence: 40/40
You put something like, "The Wolfie species as a whole is almost always far superior in intellect then other creatures." Then perhaps add that to the rest of your traits to that? And perhaps more info on where they live, what they eat, possibly territory ranges. As for the likes, that seems a bit odd to me... after all, for humans do you can you truly categorize any of us with a set group of likes? Sure you could put what an indivigual enjoys.
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Re: The Wolfie
« Reply #2 on: April 19, 2013, 10:42:51 pm »
Well, I never roleplay...It all has to do with my story. :P

And... It's too hard for me. :( Too many letters.

Sorry...

I can't do anything with my characters, I can't get people to understand them. :-[

Sorry......
« Last Edit: April 19, 2013, 10:44:57 pm by Kastilla »
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