Author Topic: ~The Death of FeralHeart  (Read 1545 times)

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~The Death of FeralHeart
« on: May 28, 2013, 07:09:48 pm »
Okay,I got bored. This is work in progress. It is a sort of vague story.

CHAPTER 1

I walk through the endless Plains. There are other felines and canines there. But their eyes are filled with true regret they have come today. They could be next. Next to fall, next to succumb to the darkness in their hearts. Storm clouds gather on the horizon, and rain starts to fall, slow at first but turning into a strong and sturdy downpour. They were coming at last. To take one of us away forever, to the place where they only know where. Lost forever are the ones they take away, forever in a black hole of darkness, forever in an unknown place of confusion. I look over at one of the felines sitting near. Once beautiful,once agile and graceful. Now, eyes pools of fright, fur plastered and out of place, body limp and weak. You cannot make friends here, for they will take them away. You never know who's next. It could be me. It could be them. But to make friends in this place...they will be gone before you say hello to the the next morning.  They are ruthless, snatching their next victim as if they were a flea.

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Re: ~The Death of FeralHeart
« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2013, 08:13:12 pm »
Why is there so many good stories coming now? ;-; I like this story.
Keep it up :D *stalkstalk*

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Re: ~The Death of FeralHeart
« Reply #2 on: May 29, 2013, 02:35:40 am »
While reading this, I drew pictures of it in my mind. Nice, not many pieces of literature can do that to me. c:
Will now be awaiting patiently for more chapters.~